Hello good sir, I came upon your piece by random, and as a little art-thing between me and friends, were supposed to jump on random stuff and critique it.

However! This is pretty awesome man gj gj. Your lines are sharper than mine when I scan things in, and the absolute best part about this is its not filled with those weird tiny strokes other people do instead of doing an actual long line. Other things to watch out for though is he, along with most of your critters I see, are hella skinny man. Nothing wrong with being skinny, but maybe make his hips and chest a different size than his waist so hes not just one long figure.

Last bit, is its a little hard to differentiate this guy (a dragon) from your other characters. At first, I kinda thought he was a hedgehog, from the hair.

But really though, nice job, you can see the work done in this and Im glad to see something other than awkward, hugecock renamon porn on this site. Keep it up! :D <3

:D Thanks, man! Honestly, thanks for the critique. I've been aiming to try and make my guys look less skinny, but it's takin' effort. As for the lines, i normally go over them after i've made them, which is why they look consistent.

And again, thank you for critiquing! <Will strive harder where was pointed out now>

Yeah! <3 Alot of people dont really respond to random critique very well. Most of the time I get back a 'ffffff what do you know leave me alone sob' xD

I look forward to seeing more of your things in the future~

Heh, i've seen those guys before. I really want to learn and make my art better, so critiques are really appreciated.

Thanks again, and i'll do my best to make more!