Hm... I don't get that 'toon feeling looking at this; I think she needs to be more expressive, and perhaps a little more... rubbery, if you know what I'm talkin' about - not like Steamboat Willie, but more like, I dunno, modern-day cartoons, like Ed, Edd n Eddy, Chowder, or The Marvelous Misadventures of Flapjack. But if this is how you want it, then I won't bother you about it, 'cause, y'know, artistic freedom and stuff. I just wanted to give my input; this was not meant to be an insult, by any means.

its not suppose to be that kinda Toon, its suppose to be like the Toon Link from Wind Waker, i should have made that more clear

Crap... I just made myself look like a complete A-hole. My sincerest apologize. Well, now that I know that, my only suggestion is to curve the upper eyelids. Again, sorry.

heh its cool you didnt know, i do like getting seom constructive criticisms every now and again XP

Excellent sketch, Rings. Lara looks cool in toon style.