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Just a beginning to a little story that I wrote in about an hour. I had lots of trouble coming up with a title, so any title suggestions will be appreciated.
I will gladly accept critique, as it is still a rough draft. :D
Enjoy and whatnot. :P
I will gladly accept critique, as it is still a rough draft. :D
Enjoy and whatnot. :P
Category Story / All
Species Wolf
Size 120 x 118px
File Size 15 kB
first off, i'd write a more constructive reply, but i always seem to be away from my head.
grammar-pretty good. i didnt really notice that many mistakes.
story-a little confuzzling right now, but i think that you'll be clearing that up. after all, this is only the prologue.
characters-i've always wanted to be a furry...
overrall, right now, i'd rate the story as a 9/10.
send me a message or something when you get more out.
grammar-pretty good. i didnt really notice that many mistakes.
story-a little confuzzling right now, but i think that you'll be clearing that up. after all, this is only the prologue.
characters-i've always wanted to be a furry...
overrall, right now, i'd rate the story as a 9/10.
send me a message or something when you get more out.
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