Beautiful Night
Just a quick, clean submission to pass the time while I get things together. I had written this nearly a year ago on my DA account, thought I would share it here.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 29.5 kB
Short and sweet, Serathin.. but you need to be mindful of your wandering tenses!
Also, you mention the possibility of an outsider 'wonder'ing (to ponder/think about) by while the protagonist is waiting to change, but that should be 'wander' (to meander/stroll aimlessly).
Also, you mention the possibility of an outsider 'wonder'ing (to ponder/think about) by while the protagonist is waiting to change, but that should be 'wander' (to meander/stroll aimlessly).
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