This is a very good piece of writing. It's very interesting even tho I don't read very much. It reminds me of kung-fu panda and avatar the last air bender and a game that me and my friends play in the basement of my house like a role-playing game with mini-figs were we create our own chars but I am not going to talk anymore about it because I have plans for things in the future. But back to what I was saying when it reminds me of those things I am not saying you copied anything i was just saying what they remind me of ok. I always wondered why your icon did not have eyes. i also have a q in the story when it is written (took Haku’s innocence) does that mean what I think it means? If so that is horable. (spelled tht wrong lol) Over all it was an awesome story and now I know about your char a lot more. I don't see why people haven't read this it is great! Keep up the great work looking forward to the next part. =3

yes...took Haku's innocence means that Haku was raped......Thank you^^

epic

heh^^ you read fast

yep. in the 5th grade, i had a 12th grade reading level

damn^^ you are good

haha thanks

so...what did you think about it

very good. sad but but good.

^^ it was meant to be sad

yep. it kind of reminds me of dare devil

heh^^ but daredevil wasn't raped....so I'm awesomer

thats very true

^^ I hope you like the other chapters...is you reading them yet

i will

*pokes you* you better

lol i will^^

good

other chapters are Trials of Time, Kokushibyou, and I'm working on Yobidasu

nice