Starting to feel a bit different about how to lay out each page lately and about having the pages
feel "full and finished". Like this page didn't originally have the big shot of Chakka looking at a couple
plushies on sale, it was all just this big collection of random, boring city-shots, all needlessly big compared
to how important they are to the overall story. I mean, establishing the world is nice and all, but I think
I've shown enough of the city-life for now and the page started feeling like something I "had" to draw to
get Chakka from A to B as opposed to something I "want" to draw because I wanna invest time into my
own characters.

And the big shot makes the page actually feel completely "full" to me, even though the rest of the shots
barely have any greyscales or other detail beyond the linework. Which I guess helps putting the focus
on Chakkas panel even more.

I wanna try to do this kind of stuff more, sizing panels depending on their actual importance and putting
more focus on what I wanna do with the characters instead of what I "have" to do to get the story moving.

Aaaaanyway, one more page in the city, then it's back home, finally, it's getting exhausting xd
Hope you still like it

Art, Schwarzpelz © me



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