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I need to get back into writing, I haven't done any for quite some time. I figure there's no better time to go back through the prompts then, is there?
This one sort of doesn't have much to it. I couldn't really think of where it was going, but it's a nice scene with maybe a little zing at the end. We'll see where the next one goes.
This one sort of doesn't have much to it. I couldn't really think of where it was going, but it's a nice scene with maybe a little zing at the end. We'll see where the next one goes.
Category Story / Fantasy
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Size 120 x 120px
File Size 20.5 kB
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Sooo, one begs the question, what is the prophecy? Why would a dark lord need Seers anyway?
It took awhile to get drawn into it, and as soon as I was, you dropped me! Thats not very nice!
I wrote a similar piece many years ago, and it seems that you did a good job of instilling the fearful wrath of the tyrant, a plus, rather than just saying he was scary. The claws on the chair thing was especially vivid, I liked that.
The mercy shown at the end however threw me off, made me wonder if the tyrant already knew the prophecy.
Good work, i hope you keep writing, you are quite good it just seems you need to spend more time.
It took awhile to get drawn into it, and as soon as I was, you dropped me! Thats not very nice!
I wrote a similar piece many years ago, and it seems that you did a good job of instilling the fearful wrath of the tyrant, a plus, rather than just saying he was scary. The claws on the chair thing was especially vivid, I liked that.
The mercy shown at the end however threw me off, made me wonder if the tyrant already knew the prophecy.
Good work, i hope you keep writing, you are quite good it just seems you need to spend more time.
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