Improvements:
The two basses are on their own seperate tracks so I can pan them and fade them individually, eliminating flat soundscape and inability to hear the main bassline.
A seperate track for only the kickdrum to allow more control of the kick, bringing it out more.
recording certain tracks in mono instead of stereo to make them more defined.
One softsynth added to parallel strings in main passage.

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