Now this is a thing of beauty. Loneliness is such an overdone topic, but you've captured it quite admirably in a very enjoyable read. Nice form, and well done.

*nods* Well thank you kindly. <3

I did my firewater-fueled best :3

"Pour liquid fire in my belly
But it fails to warm my heart"

Now that is a very, very excellent way to capture just how heavy the emotion you are feeling is, couldn't have done it better myself.

^.=.^ *hugs*

This is a fantastic little poem! It captures the mood just right. Keep your chin up, things will get better.

Danke :3 <3

Geen probleem!

Hehe <3

:3 I actually don't know german, but I can venture a guess as to the meaning of that XD

amazing job.... ^.-.^

<333

I like it.

^.=.^

They say people drink to forget, or to make them ease away the pain we feel inside.
But... Sometimes it's the opposite. The firewater frees us from the conventions of society and unearthens the feelings we hide deep inside. We feel them then, like no time else while we're amidst the rules of the herd.
At least how I am with it, though I don't drink often.

The poem, masterfully put together - and reminds me oh so accurately of the times I did that.

*nods* Glad I could bring up some strong emotions <3 always makes me feel good as a writer <3

A very nicely done piece! Actually, it sounded a bit like song lyrics to me. ^_^

~GR

:3 nah. I'm kaput with songs, I think. I had 1 good one in me, and that was Sympathy.

very beautifully written :) gives clear images of a morose setting

*nods* Thank you very much