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Thank Solgaleo the sun has come! Lets get our beach on-
First few cameos too! All cameos's will be tagged below
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Minoir, Vexa, Genevieve, Mila, Crescere, Bellaria © Me
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I love being able to see so many of your lovely ladies in one place, plus I already recognize a guest character or two and we've only just begun! Even the little "filler" characters that are semi-blurred out in the background have JUST enough detail that even they add a little something to each panel, and now I'm envisioning what some of them, like Breloom and Genesect, might look like if you gave them a full picture someday. I'll bet they'd look super cute! ^_^
It is somethin I've wanted to do for a long time tbh~ Have em all together and let them live in a world of their own \ o /
Glad ya like the lil fillers too~ they were the trickiest tbh xD
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachme.....5/genekini.png
I actually did sketch the genesect afterwards xD that was a must~
Glad ya like the lil fillers too~ they were the trickiest tbh xD
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachme.....5/genekini.png
I actually did sketch the genesect afterwards xD that was a must~
Wow this is some very quick pacing ill say haha. I would give more critism but besides this being your first comic i would need to see all pages and give you SOME thoughts but of course im not a professional and my expereince from watching artist OCTs back on DA.
Regardless keep this up. Your detail is increadable (but a bit cluttered i fear)
Regardless keep this up. Your detail is increadable (but a bit cluttered i fear)
True i cant expect much from one person, hell this is your first and for first attemps your above my expectations arleady! OCT's are Original Character Tournoments that focus on creating lengthy comics explaining characters, a world, and a little fight scene within a short ammount of time. Granted they are for artists who have lotta time and can do incredible time management and of course YEARS of practice. I am not expecting such dedication and skill from you. We all have lives and such. Comic skills come from more exprience than studying and seeing what works for you and constent feed back. Maybe i shouldnt give crituqiue cause your not having a friendly tournament with someone else and possibly many others where such criquie is needed if the artist wants to fight again fro another round or help the particpate in future OCT's
The fast pacing isnt a problem as long as you keep it up. Granted your introducing all the characters to the story quickly with little introduction or explanation but ya made a good point. it would take much longer to explain each character individually, as long as each character has an important part in the story itself and we can learn enough through their interactions with one another WHICH you have successfully been doing. I am viewing these characters without their ref sheets and you still paint to me who they are. Future panels i am guessing will deepen said understanding.
The clutter MAYBE how i feel or how your panels are set up. This is entirly my opinion and sense i dont draw, take this with the smallest grain. My main problem is that each panel could be a bit niceler if the black lines dividing them were thicker. IDk why but it caused issues for me on panels 3-4 (reading them in order). That or it could have been the character placement making me think the shiny gengar (Sorry idk ya ocs again, i dont know ya refs so imma rely on comic to give me best info whihc again, SO FAR HAS BEEN DOING GREAT) transformed into someone else.
Again, your comic is increadable so far for first try. You should be proud! VERY PROUD! This is impressive, We all make mistakes but dont let my criquie stop you from posting. If you wanna do another in the future well... Now you know some things and can improve! CAUSE HOT DAMN, this is impressive.
The fast pacing isnt a problem as long as you keep it up. Granted your introducing all the characters to the story quickly with little introduction or explanation but ya made a good point. it would take much longer to explain each character individually, as long as each character has an important part in the story itself and we can learn enough through their interactions with one another WHICH you have successfully been doing. I am viewing these characters without their ref sheets and you still paint to me who they are. Future panels i am guessing will deepen said understanding.
The clutter MAYBE how i feel or how your panels are set up. This is entirly my opinion and sense i dont draw, take this with the smallest grain. My main problem is that each panel could be a bit niceler if the black lines dividing them were thicker. IDk why but it caused issues for me on panels 3-4 (reading them in order). That or it could have been the character placement making me think the shiny gengar (Sorry idk ya ocs again, i dont know ya refs so imma rely on comic to give me best info whihc again, SO FAR HAS BEEN DOING GREAT) transformed into someone else.
Again, your comic is increadable so far for first try. You should be proud! VERY PROUD! This is impressive, We all make mistakes but dont let my criquie stop you from posting. If you wanna do another in the future well... Now you know some things and can improve! CAUSE HOT DAMN, this is impressive.
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