Nice poem ^_^ it's kind of what christmas is now...only without the blatent-ness, eh? Maybe working retail over the holidays has made me bitter...

Retail work is rather frustrating during the holidays, that's for sure. I also work retail, and customers can be quite annoying.

*screaches of laughter* I just started to sing this. It works great as a christmas carol. what a delightful little ditty it could be. Good one. *hugs*

Haha. X3 It might be a rather dark option for caroling in your neighborhood, eh?

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Damn, that's really well done.

Thank you very much. =3 Merry early Christmas to ya!

Made me want to bust out my spell book...
I mean..
Good job =D

Thank you, Guildmaster! ^w^

lol, no problem =) Still feels weird being called Guildmaster =P

What a twist. very well written, like all what you have written.

on a side note, ive still got your little brain teaser you let me read. have to say, im impressed, it took me a while to get and fully understand the logic.

Well, we will have to discuss it sometime! I never see you on MSN as of late though. o.o

mind noting me your msn again if you don't mind? you don't seem to show up for some strange reason

great poem
It would be a perfect christmas

This poem is pro tier.

Pro tier.

Oh, shucks you. X3 Thanks for the compliment, and I'm pleased you think so. 83

Hehe.

You'd have to be an dimwitted ignoramus to think that any of this poetry isn't top-notch.

Top-notch, sir, top-notch.

I am speechless, very good poetry, and It is so true. I am a christian as well. 10/10

It's always a nice feeling when somebody simply can't respond to a poem. X3 Glad you enjoyed it.

I see (sarcasm) is under you keywords, and from a poetic standpoint, I shall CERTAINLY see this as such! xD

A VERY interesting piece; I'd say you portrayed the yuletide reversals quite nicely, my favorite being:

"The halls are decked with pentagrams." lol

It certainly isn't my cup of tea, topic-wise; however, I can't deny that the concept was well executed. ^^


Oh, though I should mention, I noticed quite a few lines of iambic tetrameter; it actually wouldn't be too hard to make them all that way, being that that meter seems heavily rooted in the poem already. Of course, this is just me being...ME! It's by no means necessary. x3

For example:

"Hail seperation: church and state.
Religion ceases to exist.
The reason garland lines the hall
is lost behind eternal mist."

Interesting... twist. Makes you think. Hopefully the end of the world is still a long ways off, eh?

I'd like to add that I've already decided any poetry you create is awesome, so you can just count that as a given. From now on I'll be focusing on what you're actually saying.

Well, thank you very much. ^^ It's quite alright if you focus on the content; I rather enjoy answering questions about the topic. I like praise, but its even better when people try to understand what I write. =3

Try? I succeed. :P

I meant no offense. X3 I was merely speaking in generalized terms.

None taken. :3 I'm in a weird mood, so no worries!

Well... Good thing it hasn't happened!

Okay, okay, this one's not too bad either. Sometimes I was funny.