Whoa...three unfinished stories in a row?
Erm, that doesn't seem like coincidence to me, I'll....not talk about any further unless you're comfortable.

Anyway, I did read all the unfinished stories (Including the goomba one) and honestly? I like them all since I like the way humor is handled in your stories, and perhaps you're the only writer who implements "divide-and-conquer" strategy in a growth story.

I'd read these unfinished stories again once they're finished.

Like all writers (right?) I have a substantial selection of stories I never got around to finishing. I've decided to but out a new one each weekend until there all out. Is first so that people get stuff to read, the stuff won't be lost if something very unlikely occurs and so I know which ones are wanted the most and can be encouraged to finished them.

Please tell me which of the four (so far) that you'll most like to be expanded upon.

Well, If I have rank them, I'd say:


1- Stellaris fanfiction:
Now I may have only heard about the game, but what kind of species whose culture revolve around punching? Did their infants had punchifiers to sush them? XD
Also, I'd like see what the drake does once it finds the thorod avians plans (assuming that is the path you're taking).

2- FF 6 Ultros:
We all had that one villain that we wanted to replace the final boss...and it's final fantasy so yeah.
But I find so much potential in this since FF games in general had plenty of myth, magic and all its color and size. And if you played the GBA version the contents that was cut from SNES was restored and there would be more elements to play with.

3- Maximus:
First of all +10 credits points for not giving maximus mind-manipulation powers that automatically solves all problems, said powers apparently appears whenever someone big enough according to most growth stories (not saying that the option is bad, it's just that 99.9% of them use it so...maybe I read the wrong ones...)
But anyway, the story was kind of hard to follow in the mid part, but I got intrigued once we reached the amalgamation/abomination...that was a real sudden change of atmosphere.

4- Goomba:
Part 1 was fun to imagine, having them bump into each other was creative and funny as a trigger.
As for 2-6 part, I felt like it all falls into "one part" for being so short, and I'm eager to see what you had planned for next.



# I think I know how to beat this "God Ultros", but only works for certain versions...I'll PM you my thoughts soon after your reply.

Punchy's don't really do through a helpless stage where they need to cry for their mummies. Like many insects they are born mobile. Since they can hear though there eggs and they are nearly transparent they can learn a lot whilst still in the shell. Most an about as educated as a year old before they even hatch. Crognack meanwhile got his first degree before he was even hatched. In punchy society any violence against the person short of murder is rarely punished, aliened visitors are all but in mech suits for their own safety. Punchies heal very fast and have a lot of redundancy in their organs most especially their brains. Likewise all their stuff self repairs quickly and has a lot of redundancy Dishonesty, especially towards oneself, meanwhile is severely punished.

When you just "zap your good now" they aren't helping a person there destroying them and replacing them without some they like more that looks the same. These "super fluffy goddess orgy" growth stories are in way far more evil their simply destroying/eating the universe. No being worthy of worship would ever want it.

What are the mid bits you found most difficult to follow?

The Goomba story I'm sort of writing by the seat of my pants. I sort of know now it will end and have a few scenes I want to put in but beyond that I'm going were they Muse of macrophila directs me.