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I love anthro comics where we get to see the other family members. So tired of comics where every single friggin character is hovering around the late teens to early twenties mark. It's like a never-ending episode of friends where nobody dies and everyone only cares about sex and sarcasm.
Enough ranting from me. I think there might be a typo in the last panel.
"You know she does even when someone comes back from the store"
Might need to be "You know she does that even when someone comes back from the store" but I can see how you have very limited space to put in even one more word. Maybe a contraction would help "Y'know she does that even when someone comes back from the store"
Enough ranting from me. I think there might be a typo in the last panel.
"You know she does even when someone comes back from the store"
Might need to be "You know she does that even when someone comes back from the store" but I can see how you have very limited space to put in even one more word. Maybe a contraction would help "Y'know she does that even when someone comes back from the store"
And I missed another word -.- Thanks though. Usually no one tells me these mistakes and after 3 rewrites and it being 3 in the morning when doing these, I never can proof read that well. I'll try to get all of these things fixed :D
I do try to make some time pass with my comic, but saddly it being only a weekly comic, if it ran as fast as normal time it would have time to tell their stories. Today makes it the 4th year doing rayne, but about 2 1/2 years have really gone by.
I do try to make some time pass with my comic, but saddly it being only a weekly comic, if it ran as fast as normal time it would have time to tell their stories. Today makes it the 4th year doing rayne, but about 2 1/2 years have really gone by.
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