A Single Lick [Lined Only]
A single lick provides just enough of a catalyst to initiate a cross-species sync... Or a 'transformation,' as the humans call it.
Big sequence - thought I'd post it lined before I coloured it because it still looks cool.
Colored version here
Big sequence - thought I'd post it lined before I coloured it because it still looks cool.
Colored version here
Category Artwork (Digital) / Transformation
Species Lizard
Size 1000 x 1280px
File Size 250.2 kB
Hey, starting with the critics because I'm evil :p
The human face for the first panels are not that good, a bit too round,
The text are sometimes really unreadable, I know it's the point for some, but the important word/sound might give more impact if they are readable. ^^
Then got a bit lost on the first read of it, But got it all the second time, don't know if interresting to know for you. ^^
And then... Why shrinking whileno indication of it? (with the last panel with a shirt I was even thinking the opposite like he was growing)
So we can get a Big lizard with a small lizard on it (and mass conservation xD)
Then the shocked expression on the forth pannel is really well done, the hand and poses are nealed too all along good job with it. ^^
The change of the feet to paws are really good looking,
And in general this comic give a good impression, good job on it and continue on it. ^^
The human face for the first panels are not that good, a bit too round,
The text are sometimes really unreadable, I know it's the point for some, but the important word/sound might give more impact if they are readable. ^^
Then got a bit lost on the first read of it, But got it all the second time, don't know if interresting to know for you. ^^
And then... Why shrinking whileno indication of it? (with the last panel with a shirt I was even thinking the opposite like he was growing)
So we can get a Big lizard with a small lizard on it (and mass conservation xD)
Then the shocked expression on the forth pannel is really well done, the hand and poses are nealed too all along good job with it. ^^
The change of the feet to paws are really good looking,
And in general this comic give a good impression, good job on it and continue on it. ^^
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