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Another DNB goodie I cooked up. The announcer voice was inspired in part by the citywide overwatch voices from HL2, the rest just fell into place.
I would sincerely appreciate some feedback on this one, it helps me improve. Don't be afraid of hurting my feelings, I'm a tough wuff.
I would sincerely appreciate some feedback on this one, it helps me improve. Don't be afraid of hurting my feelings, I'm a tough wuff.
Category Music / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 3.56 MB
I like the fade-ish double beat in the first second, but that clipping at the 2nd, 6th, and 8th second seem slightly out of place, though when I listen to it several times it fits in better. I might push it all back 2-3 seconds with another repeat of the first second's drum before going into the clipping sound. Give the ears a bit more time to adjust to what they're about to hear before before it skips and crackles.
The only other thing I could suggest would be to change the ending a little bit. Add another 2-3 seconds of that staccato build up. With only the 5-7 clicks, it seems.. thrown in there without much thought.
Otherwise, great piece.
The only other thing I could suggest would be to change the ending a little bit. Add another 2-3 seconds of that staccato build up. With only the 5-7 clicks, it seems.. thrown in there without much thought.
Otherwise, great piece.
Thanks, really appreciate the feedback! I guess I was aiming for a 'frantic' feel to the song as a whole so a couple things did get cut a bit shorter than normal, but then again, I've always had a bit of a problem with making transitions a bit too short. Again, thanks for the input!
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