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Every good curriculum on script writing will teach us, early on, not to have long conversations with the characters standing still -- apart from a soap opera. Here, I showcase a chapter from one of my pony stories. Notice how the main conversation gets broken up by other actions, including side gags.
NOTE: The story linked to is an old work in progress. The final version may be significantly different.
NOTE: The story linked to is an old work in progress. The final version may be significantly different.
Category Story / Tutorials
Species Pony
Size 100 x 100px
File Size 10.1 kB
Or just embrace the Talking Heads in your stories. M Night Shaymalan already has https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0BWqzqhonus
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