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A young man orders a werewolf costume and gets transformed into one.
Pretty standard this one but I added some internal conflict that I hope gets across well.
Pretty standard this one but I added some internal conflict that I hope gets across well.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Wolf
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 133.6 kB
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Thanks so much! I was afraid I hadn't written that well enough but guess I was writing too much. Though saying that I may revisit this later. Do you ever find when you publish a story more ideas related to it appear in your head?
As for the spaces not showing it sounds like you wolf need to clear your browser's cache data. When you download it again it should show spaces between the paragraphs.
As for the spaces not showing it sounds like you wolf need to clear your browser's cache data. When you download it again it should show spaces between the paragraphs.
Oh, I have definitely gone back and wanted to edit stories after I posted them XD
If I was to throw any suggestions at you, it would be to consider revisiting the first few paragraphs where you are describing the guy. I find that dropping a bunch of raw description right at the start can make people lose interest sometimes. It might work better to lessen the amount of description a bit, and let some of the rest just be implied by having it come up naturally in the story?
If I was to throw any suggestions at you, it would be to consider revisiting the first few paragraphs where you are describing the guy. I find that dropping a bunch of raw description right at the start can make people lose interest sometimes. It might work better to lessen the amount of description a bit, and let some of the rest just be implied by having it come up naturally in the story?
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