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Nick and Judy are finally taking some well-deserved R&R, taking advantage of some free passes granted to them by the naturalist club, of all places. Seems they appreciated having Emmet back, after all. And, wouldn't you know it, Nick appears to be a regular! He even has a membership card, and on his tenth visit - which just so happens to be this one - he gets free attendance to one of the many seminars, sessions, and otherwise groups that the club holds at regular intervals with one guest. Harmony awaits...but is the surface level all there is to this class?
This fic will, in the future, contain soft vore and digestion. Fair warning. It is being compartmentalized, though, so depending on your tastes you can skip over whatever happens to be your own personal "nasty bits".
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This was actually a lot of fun to work on and took way longer than it should have. Thanks to Daolord for the idea and for being lovely throughout the process, and very very patient. He's great to work with, 5/7 would recommend.
All rights to characters go to Disney.
This fic will, in the future, contain soft vore and digestion. Fair warning. It is being compartmentalized, though, so depending on your tastes you can skip over whatever happens to be your own personal "nasty bits".
Commission for
DaolordThis was actually a lot of fun to work on and took way longer than it should have. Thanks to Daolord for the idea and for being lovely throughout the process, and very very patient. He's great to work with, 5/7 would recommend.
All rights to characters go to Disney.
Category Story / Fanart
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 17.6 kB
Listed in Folders
I immediately love how you set the characters. It's perfect and the fact I can hear them in their voices makes it even better. The lead up to the hustle line after that small, sweet moment felt worth it. That's definitely a great writing moment on your end. I also liked how you're describing everything. It feels natural and not overdone.
The mystery regarding what Judy tells Nick before they enter and Yak's delivery makes this even more interesting. Damn, I love that lol. Not much to add with the story so far (typing this as I read) but the small details with the characters is impressive!
The whole intro of this was extremely well done. You kept the characters from the movie, elaborated on environment and made it all very dynamic, even for an intro. There were some small things like missing quotations for the pamphlet description in parentheses and perhaps a few bulky sentences but overall, I enjoyed this intro.
The mystery regarding what Judy tells Nick before they enter and Yak's delivery makes this even more interesting. Damn, I love that lol. Not much to add with the story so far (typing this as I read) but the small details with the characters is impressive!
The whole intro of this was extremely well done. You kept the characters from the movie, elaborated on environment and made it all very dynamic, even for an intro. There were some small things like missing quotations for the pamphlet description in parentheses and perhaps a few bulky sentences but overall, I enjoyed this intro.
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