1) I think my corneas evaporated just reading it all.
2) You follow your heart and you will always find the answer.

thanks man, i appreciate it

Your welcome

*hug*

1. Your word choice is brilliant and you have great description. As of now though it needs depth and exploring which can only be done with you write more.
2. If you wouldn’t it would be a waste of time and good work that has very good potential.

thank you very much...I am currently on chapter two now, couldn't sleep last night so I stayed up till two in the morning writing lol

Okay, I find this extreamly insperational, I couldn't stop thinking about it all day, I even zoned out during English(favorite class) and that's a lot.

Omg! I really had that much of an effect on you with this? *wags tail happily* i thought it was good...but didn't think it was THAT good

Insperational enough for me to continue making more war stories, but of corse there about Mike; I finished one, then my PC froze before I save it, so I had fun remembering it all again. I forgot to tell anyone that I used to be good at war stories; in 8th grade I made 3, 10 page stories about WW2, only I had to write it all out on paper.

oh nice...but really, thank you so much. That comment made my day even sweeter. *I start saturday at MCDonalds, I found out this morning, and then we got wireless internet so i can finally sit on the living room couch with joes computer. all in all an awesome day*

Well I'm glad to hear that.

:P

you never cease to amaze me with the skill of writing that you have. the overall build of the story is perfect,its so extremly descriptive that i can acually picture the setting and the emotion is so deep that i can acually feel the mood of of each and every situation in it.there are very few storys that i have read that got me so into it that i acually felt i was there.i love the story and i cant wait for more.you really do deserve more reconition then you get.

ありがとう　＾＾

thank you for sharing your talent with us
i appreciate it.

wow...after reading this, I have to hug someone. *hug* thank you little brother, I really do appreciate it. Glad to know that there are people out there who appreciate my talents. *beaming with pride now *

this is excelent!! it puts my writing to shame though... i really enjoyed it very much! it waas well done and i hope for more!! and even helix left a comment.

I take it Helix is a writer too eh?

a good writer. and the person to go to if you want critique on a story

I shall keep that in mind, thanks