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DRAFT 2 CAN NOW BE FOUND OVER AT:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3120663/
The second song submitted under the Urakai banner. Oh noes~!
So I've finally gotten wise to my own pattern of finding something to loathe about my songs within 48 hours or less of getting them online, and thus am presently only putting this one here~! Why here? Easiest place to get away with a second draft, I'm finding. Newgrounds tends to ignore those.
In any case, a field song, more or less. I've had rough versions of this worked out for ages but just finally got around to wrapping up something proper with it. As is, this is the first public version of the thing so do pick it apart and tell me what you think, as right now I'm seeking feedback for improving it and what not.
I also discovered my relative lack of decent strings for the purposes I've been wanting strings for, and tried to cover that by having the violin layer over them. Neither has the strongest attack in the world, however, so... well, just tell me what you think. =3=;
Loop may not be perfect because atm that wasn't my biggest concerrrrn~ owo
HamstaPowah © Samuel "Zaron X" Boyd
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3120663/
The second song submitted under the Urakai banner. Oh noes~!
So I've finally gotten wise to my own pattern of finding something to loathe about my songs within 48 hours or less of getting them online, and thus am presently only putting this one here~! Why here? Easiest place to get away with a second draft, I'm finding. Newgrounds tends to ignore those.
In any case, a field song, more or less. I've had rough versions of this worked out for ages but just finally got around to wrapping up something proper with it. As is, this is the first public version of the thing so do pick it apart and tell me what you think, as right now I'm seeking feedback for improving it and what not.
I also discovered my relative lack of decent strings for the purposes I've been wanting strings for, and tried to cover that by having the violin layer over them. Neither has the strongest attack in the world, however, so... well, just tell me what you think. =3=;
Loop may not be perfect because atm that wasn't my biggest concerrrrn~ owo
HamstaPowah © Samuel "Zaron X" Boyd
Category Music / Game Music
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 2.59 MB
Not entirely sure if that captures the evil of the Urakai (wasn't there a t in there?)
Not a bad song, reminds me a lot of Wind Waker though, but that's really not a bad thing...
1:08 is a bit cluttered, but I'm not sure what you'd do to fix that, I wouldn't mind hearing some ino song, but I don't know if that would help this
shrug
8/10 only cause I'm not sure, but that's more my empty head then anything else
Whoot
Not a bad song, reminds me a lot of Wind Waker though, but that's really not a bad thing...
1:08 is a bit cluttered, but I'm not sure what you'd do to fix that, I wouldn't mind hearing some ino song, but I don't know if that would help this
shrug
8/10 only cause I'm not sure, but that's more my empty head then anything else
Whoot
Thanks a load! :D
I've actually had a second draft of this done up for a while now, but due to the outage I couldn't get it on FA proper. If you care to compare, it's over yonder at http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3120663/ :)
I've actually had a second draft of this done up for a while now, but due to the outage I couldn't get it on FA proper. If you care to compare, it's over yonder at http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3120663/ :)
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