I mean it... how do i fix it?

>>♦THE ARTWORK

>Type : Daily Painting

Title: How do i Fix this?!!
Or (The Running Fire of time)

>Duration

♦ 4 hours

>Intro

You see, i started with a black canvass, with my high hopes
today i do nice character! so i can finally get to that level!

did a nice drawing of this guy walking on a hall room talking to his friend
.um okay let's paint it.

BUT....

I forgot i got this psycho problem were i finish doing something way different than planned
and most of the time it becomes something that relates somewhat, to a personal experience.

>♦STORY

This guy,
is struggling to know how to turn the fire out
by using this gizmo he has in his hand
and doesn't even know how use it
so he is looking at the screen for a instruction manual to learn how to use it
but....fire is coming and there's not much time left.

>Explanation

So this is what i believe this means.

The guy i think represents me
The fire is time, always chasing me everyday
The gizmo is drawing tablet, the computer, and the software itself
and the screen is the monitor were i search for help all day long

So...
This is me trying to learn how to fix every mess of art i do.
Before time limit reaches.

>Inspiration Sources:

♦ haha I dunoo. this is not planned,
it just comes from my subconscious or who knows from where.

> about the technique

♦basic brushes
♦ Mixer brush
♦ Tex brushes
♦Layer blending modes.

> about the species

Filling this part always a pain.
umm........maybe because i've never sure of what to write.

>♦GRIPE

Umm.....I suck at character design.

>♦CRITIQUE

You suck

umm......problems with anatomy and construction
there's not coherence in volume.
and heavy problems of integration
you are mixing realistic things with cartoony things
and you have problems with that
specially in terms of proportions
you are trying to mix different art styles and not integrating them well.

Ummm.......

>Recommendations

The only thing i can think of is draw characters like hell
and look for learning content that can help you
and be extremely patient because you'll probably get better
only after hours and hours of training.

P.S
I think i will take a rest from the schedule of practicing feng zhu and craig.
i think i have a good foundation on rendering but really suck at anatomy and character design
so i think i will go "all in" on characters.

>♦Personal Judgment, Score

Overall Quality 6/10 or 5

The Feel of expression 5/10
Technique 6/10
Anatomy 4.5/10
Shading 6/10
Construction 5/10
Lighting 6/10
Colors 6/12
Perspective 6/10
Creativity 6/9
Style 5/10
Composition 4/10
Shapes 4/10
Stroke Flow 6/11
Design 4.5/10
Gesture 5/10

♦ Negative values

Ugliness 5/10
Boringness 4/9
Level of self-cringeness 7/9

v02 26/02/2019

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