you dont give yourself enough credit, it was pretty good, you should post your other song so we can here that one too, your best songs are generaly the ones you think are the worst. but let me give you some advise, if you want it.

when your playing the piano, you need to make it sound more natrual, the way that was played sounded as if you used a program to make it, your music should weave, or flow, thats the trademark of classical, try using the pedal with your music too, it helps it flow along better. so when your playing it, relax, you dont have to start into your song right away, the way i play my music, is that its never ever righten down, music comes from inside you, so it dosent have to sound the same everytime you play the songs, also, you are playing your music in a way thats ment to be in a group, the more people there are, the less notes you will have to play, so dont be afraid to make it all, um.... notesey? sorry if this sounded way critical, i think of music as another artform, so i tend to be overely critical. by the way, the type of piano you have makes a difference to the kind of music you can play, jazz works best on a stand up piano, and classical generaly works best on a grand, both jazz and classical work on a baby grand, so if you know a place that has one, aka. music stores, art galeries, ect... dont be afraid to ask to play. i do it all the time, i love to play the piano.

Thanks for the favorite and advice!

More details on my shout to you :3

you are welcome, so, do you actualy know how to play the piano, or is it just the programs?
now that i know its programs i sympathise with you, im not verry good with programs that play music for you.

Thanks for the sympathy.

I can see where you may not be able to use programs. But I'm just one of those guys who needs order in order to create art. :)

yah, thats actualy my problem, im a random person, thats why my music playing style works so well, its a type that comes purel;y from the hart, that swhy i cant use programs