is wrighting a story for me, and is in need of feedback.

She new to FA and is worried her story's will go unnoticed. please read them and comment on what you think.. here's the story's shes written so far!

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3000861 - Prologue

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3004436 - Chapter 1,Fantasy

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3004451 - Chapter 2, Reality

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3050803 - Chapter 3, Collide

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3054801 - Chapter 4, Dreams End

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3058714 - Chapter 5, Capture

Once shes finished Writing shell be up for story commission's. so YAY you.

if you want artwork now then go here - http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/955044/