Ah, isn't this wonderful?
You can feel it coursing through your new body. POWER. Power your old, pathetic human body was never able to possess.
You see, I kept my promise. Electricity itself is yours to command. Enough electricity resides in your body to power a dozen cities! And it's all YOURS.
Your old human body would shatter and fail you with a single lightning strike. Now, Lightning makes you STRONGER. Now it's simply fuel for your new, improved self. How does it feel?
You possess power. I possess you. Fair trade, isn't it?
I'll be taking over now.
Like I said, though, I am a kind and fair being. I never kill or harm my precious hosts.
I won't wash your consciousness away. I'll just push you to the back of your very own mind, in a comfortable corner where you will live out the rest of our immortal lives.
There, you can sit and feel. Feel the intoxicatingly pleasant sensations of rubber and electricity rubbing against your skin. Feel the POWER that you have paid for with your body. You can feel your feet, legs, arms, and chest. You just can't control them.
Enjoy your power!
I'll certainly be enjoying my new freedom.
Who knows? Maybe if you're a good little subconscious and don't cause any trouble, In a couple centuries I'll let you come outside and play . . .
Zeraora practice rubber drawing and sequel to power!
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/29721008/
Critiques, faves, and comments appreciated
You can feel it coursing through your new body. POWER. Power your old, pathetic human body was never able to possess.
You see, I kept my promise. Electricity itself is yours to command. Enough electricity resides in your body to power a dozen cities! And it's all YOURS.
Your old human body would shatter and fail you with a single lightning strike. Now, Lightning makes you STRONGER. Now it's simply fuel for your new, improved self. How does it feel?
You possess power. I possess you. Fair trade, isn't it?
I'll be taking over now.
Like I said, though, I am a kind and fair being. I never kill or harm my precious hosts.
I won't wash your consciousness away. I'll just push you to the back of your very own mind, in a comfortable corner where you will live out the rest of our immortal lives.
There, you can sit and feel. Feel the intoxicatingly pleasant sensations of rubber and electricity rubbing against your skin. Feel the POWER that you have paid for with your body. You can feel your feet, legs, arms, and chest. You just can't control them.
Enjoy your power!
I'll certainly be enjoying my new freedom.
Who knows? Maybe if you're a good little subconscious and don't cause any trouble, In a couple centuries I'll let you come outside and play . . .
Zeraora practice rubber drawing and sequel to power!
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/29721008/
Critiques, faves, and comments appreciated
Category Artwork (Digital) / Pokemon
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Hmm the arms near shoulder are a bit thin as if they lack some fat and musculature. near the elbows I think they are ok, as there they seem to fit that vertically stretched slim style, which is not bad on its own. The neck is difficult to tell on one side it is a bit too long otherwise is good. The head and the tail do look proportionally good for the style and seem to fit.
The knee thigh line is a bit short compered to lower half legs. Like imagine you bending it in a knee usually your thumb touches at bast a waist, and I thing digitigrade leg, have more to the space between ankle and feet, and less from ankle to the knee. But space from thigh to knee is roughly the same. There might be some differences from person to person but they are not too usual. in your image the leg doesn't looks too bent forward, so it makes strange illusion, so maybe shading the knee a bit more might hrlp to see at least that it is perspective change. (What I want to say, either it would be good to make that part to take more of a leg, or show it is facing forward according to perspective, but general leg to body proportion might stay. it seems to be ok.)
The knee thigh line is a bit short compered to lower half legs. Like imagine you bending it in a knee usually your thumb touches at bast a waist, and I thing digitigrade leg, have more to the space between ankle and feet, and less from ankle to the knee. But space from thigh to knee is roughly the same. There might be some differences from person to person but they are not too usual. in your image the leg doesn't looks too bent forward, so it makes strange illusion, so maybe shading the knee a bit more might hrlp to see at least that it is perspective change. (What I want to say, either it would be good to make that part to take more of a leg, or show it is facing forward according to perspective, but general leg to body proportion might stay. it seems to be ok.)
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