Working pencils of this image. Some parts subject to change. Final version will be wearing pants -- cloth folds are a pain for me. Face and gun may change. :P
Still working on the third one -- I've drawn and redrawn and re-inked that one more times than I wish I had. :P
At least this one, being clean, I can easily work with during my breaks at work.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Western Dragon
Size 925 x 1177px
File Size 132.8 kB
Ya know, this is even BETTER than the 3D model you did before. ^..^
I really love the frontal view of his face... this gives him such a fierce, unique look. Very well done!
The pose is strong and the anatomy looks quite okay... there are just a few parts, which you should take a second look at again:
+) His left arm (biceps) seems to be right but I can't figure it out... it just feels not completely correct to me. Maybe, it is the lower arm... or the gauntlet. I dunno, but there is "something"! :P
+) Perspective of the gun: if the gun is pointed in the left direction with this angle, you should take care of his right hand again. Maybe, it's the handle of the gun.... well, take a second look, okay?
+) I guess, the upper body (around the waist) is a little bit TOO long! You can reduce this by "pressing" the torso together a little. OR you just enlarge the legs.
Yepp, the left thigh is too short!
But taking care of the torso would be easier! ^--^
Yepp, that's it! You see, just a few little things, which you can correct in a matter of minutes!!! ;)
Overall, I really like the strong, powerful pose and the cool head design!
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really love the frontal view of his face... this gives him such a fierce, unique look. Very well done!
The pose is strong and the anatomy looks quite okay... there are just a few parts, which you should take a second look at again:
+) His left arm (biceps) seems to be right but I can't figure it out... it just feels not completely correct to me. Maybe, it is the lower arm... or the gauntlet. I dunno, but there is "something"! :P
+) Perspective of the gun: if the gun is pointed in the left direction with this angle, you should take care of his right hand again. Maybe, it's the handle of the gun.... well, take a second look, okay?
+) I guess, the upper body (around the waist) is a little bit TOO long! You can reduce this by "pressing" the torso together a little. OR you just enlarge the legs.
Yepp, the left thigh is too short!
But taking care of the torso would be easier! ^--^
Yepp, that's it! You see, just a few little things, which you can correct in a matter of minutes!!! ;)
Overall, I really like the strong, powerful pose and the cool head design!
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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