Malice and Alettia were part of the same squadron before joining the GM program and whose squad become the prototype for the GM3 series. Malice and Alettia are now the only two surviving members of their former squad and of the GM3 series prototype. Their long history together has caused a bond between them which would fool observers into believing them to be brother/sister (which has nothing to do with the red skin and horns).
Alettia fills the teams support role and will often be working as a sniper for the team; unlike her ‘brother’ she has almost limitless patients and attention to detail. Because of these traits she also fills the role of second in command.
Any advice, hints and tips about how to improve my skill as an artist would be without a doubt very much appreciated. Or if you have any questions about the character, squadron or anything else, just leave a comment. =D
Alettia fills the teams support role and will often be working as a sniper for the team; unlike her ‘brother’ she has almost limitless patients and attention to detail. Because of these traits she also fills the role of second in command.
Any advice, hints and tips about how to improve my skill as an artist would be without a doubt very much appreciated. Or if you have any questions about the character, squadron or anything else, just leave a comment. =D
Category All / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 900 x 1000px
File Size 950.1 kB
Dude, now you're speaking my kind of language. I really dig this pic, and not just for the girl with the big gun!
As for critique, hrm. First off, her tail looks, well, limp. Based on the smile she's got, I don't think limp is the way to go. The clothes look alright. Something about her chest looks a little off to me. I think her left breast is a little too close to her armpit? Also, big kudos for not just pasting a set of beach balls to her front!
I have a lot I could say about lighting, too. But then again, for a character profile, cheating on lighting isn't such a bad thing. If the explosion is your main light source, the character would be brightest around her edges. Even if there was a bright light covering her front, it helps make the explosion look bigger. The backdrop lighting is pretty sweet, all in all.
As for critique, hrm. First off, her tail looks, well, limp. Based on the smile she's got, I don't think limp is the way to go. The clothes look alright. Something about her chest looks a little off to me. I think her left breast is a little too close to her armpit? Also, big kudos for not just pasting a set of beach balls to her front!
I have a lot I could say about lighting, too. But then again, for a character profile, cheating on lighting isn't such a bad thing. If the explosion is your main light source, the character would be brightest around her edges. Even if there was a bright light covering her front, it helps make the explosion look bigger. The backdrop lighting is pretty sweet, all in all.
Yeah I have no idea how to draw decent tails, but making them 'less limp' would be a good start. And I can't seem to be able to figure out how to give correct lighting without screwing up the skin colours.
Oh and its nice to see somebody on FA that apreciates realistic sized breasts in opposed to beach balls
Thanks for the advice it meens alot
Oh and its nice to see somebody on FA that apreciates realistic sized breasts in opposed to beach balls
Thanks for the advice it meens alot
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