That Day, Part 13 - Heartbreak
Part 13 of my gay romance story That Day in which things between Harvey and Oliver get pretty bad...
Meant to get this posted yesterday, but ran into a number of problems and didn't get around to it until now.
I'm glad to have finally reached this chapter and get it done, as the events of this part have been planned pretty much from the beginning when I was planning this story. Other storylines and plot elements have come and gone as I developed the story, but this chapter has always been there and and I've been working towards it and building up to it since then, setting up stuff that the two of them would bring up here.
I can hardly believe how quickly I wrote the first draft of this, it was less than a week. It has to be the quickest Ive ever written a chapter of anything. I mean, I wrote the whole argument scene in one go, it just poured out of me and I couldn't stop, which was one of the most productive writing sessions I've ever had.
I did once have the idea that when I got to this point, I would play a joke and claim that this was the last chapter, that this was how Harvey and Oliver's story ended. But I abandoned that idea, thinking it might be a little too cruel for those people who might be into the story and the characters.
So, this is not the end of their story, just a big important milestone that I've finally managed to reach. I'm not done with Harvey and Oliver yet... :)
Meant to get this posted yesterday, but ran into a number of problems and didn't get around to it until now.
I'm glad to have finally reached this chapter and get it done, as the events of this part have been planned pretty much from the beginning when I was planning this story. Other storylines and plot elements have come and gone as I developed the story, but this chapter has always been there and and I've been working towards it and building up to it since then, setting up stuff that the two of them would bring up here.
I can hardly believe how quickly I wrote the first draft of this, it was less than a week. It has to be the quickest Ive ever written a chapter of anything. I mean, I wrote the whole argument scene in one go, it just poured out of me and I couldn't stop, which was one of the most productive writing sessions I've ever had.
I did once have the idea that when I got to this point, I would play a joke and claim that this was the last chapter, that this was how Harvey and Oliver's story ended. But I abandoned that idea, thinking it might be a little too cruel for those people who might be into the story and the characters.
So, this is not the end of their story, just a big important milestone that I've finally managed to reach. I'm not done with Harvey and Oliver yet... :)
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Okay... wow.
That was quite the ride to read. Considering this is a story about their romance, I didn't expect the story to end there, but I certainly didn't expect it to go that far in the first place! I find that interesting, as I haven't read many pieces where the 'destined lovers' actually break up and reject each other~
I hope they do turn out okay though. I feel bad for the both of them for all their sufferings, and I enjoy that both characters can be sympathized with despite being on two different sides of an argument~
That was quite the ride to read. Considering this is a story about their romance, I didn't expect the story to end there, but I certainly didn't expect it to go that far in the first place! I find that interesting, as I haven't read many pieces where the 'destined lovers' actually break up and reject each other~
I hope they do turn out okay though. I feel bad for the both of them for all their sufferings, and I enjoy that both characters can be sympathized with despite being on two different sides of an argument~
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