Commentary for May 08, 2013:

And that is the end of Chapter 1. The next couple of updates will not be the start of Chapter 2, but rather... well, you'll see on Saturday.

The only thing I'm really not sure about on this page is Thoronir's face. As an avid Skyrim player, I decided to loosely base the eldar of Eon's World, physiologically, on the elves as they're portrayed in that game, with long, somewhat narrow faces (although I draw the line at those creepy golden eyes). I don't think Thoronir looks awful, but I do think I need more practice drawing elves. Oh, I'll be getting plenty of that, I assure you.

Interestingly, 'Thoronir' is one of the first references to The Elder Scrolls series that I included in the comic, as he is named after a wood elf shopkeeper from the Imperial City in Oblivion.