That Day, Part 11 - That Moment (W.I.P)
Chapter 11 of That Day, in which Harvey and Oliver go on another date, during which there are a few problems, but it all leads to Oliver having a personal revelation.
Yes, it's finally a new chapter of this story, just over a year after I posted the previous one. I was stuck on this chapter for a long, long time, trying to figure it out. But I am determined to be more productive this year, especially on the writing front, and finally managed to break through my creative block on this chapter and get it done. Which is good, as one of my goals for 2019 is to finish 'That Day', or at least the first book of it, so I can try to get it published
I am calling this a work in progress, as it is subject to change in a future rewrite once I have the whole thing done.
If you're interested in checking out the previous chapters of this gay romance story, they can be found here: http://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/.....6768/That-Day/
Yes, it's finally a new chapter of this story, just over a year after I posted the previous one. I was stuck on this chapter for a long, long time, trying to figure it out. But I am determined to be more productive this year, especially on the writing front, and finally managed to break through my creative block on this chapter and get it done. Which is good, as one of my goals for 2019 is to finish 'That Day', or at least the first book of it, so I can try to get it published
I am calling this a work in progress, as it is subject to change in a future rewrite once I have the whole thing done.
If you're interested in checking out the previous chapters of this gay romance story, they can be found here: http://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/.....6768/That-Day/
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That really was a rollercoatser of bad happenings with Justin arriving at the festival and all the things happeneing, but Oliver and Harvey did find out a few things especially Oliver.
But can he really say it to his bear that he loves him? With how Harvey breaks his barriers down there is no doubt the next time they meet.
But Harvey should have told Olover about the Wolf's statements. Oliver is way too insecure with himself to not put any kind of emotional problem of Harvey onto his head as we saw.
But now what does Marcus want to tell Oliver and will Harvey want to strangle him for it? Of course should it be something disturbing that might help even. Oliver then has to meet Harvey asap meaning he could spill his love to the bear before he can capsul it up like he normally does.
Wonderful as always.
But can he really say it to his bear that he loves him? With how Harvey breaks his barriers down there is no doubt the next time they meet.
But Harvey should have told Olover about the Wolf's statements. Oliver is way too insecure with himself to not put any kind of emotional problem of Harvey onto his head as we saw.
But now what does Marcus want to tell Oliver and will Harvey want to strangle him for it? Of course should it be something disturbing that might help even. Oliver then has to meet Harvey asap meaning he could spill his love to the bear before he can capsul it up like he normally does.
Wonderful as always.
You really think this was a rollercoaster? Believe me, this was pretty tame compared to the what Harvey and Oliver are going to be going through in the next several chapters! :)
I'm actually expecting the next few chapters to be kind of tough to write as they involve putting these characters I love through the emotional wringer. But I'm also kind of looking forward to writing it, as its an important part of the story I've been planning and building up to since the beginning.
Anyway, glad you liked this part and thank you for taking the time to comment. :)
I'm actually expecting the next few chapters to be kind of tough to write as they involve putting these characters I love through the emotional wringer. But I'm also kind of looking forward to writing it, as its an important part of the story I've been planning and building up to since the beginning.
Anyway, glad you liked this part and thank you for taking the time to comment. :)
I started binge reading these chapters and you have me hooked so far, I can't wait for the next part. Hopefully some truth starts coming out so Harvey and Oliver don't have to hide so much anymore~
I really appreciate your content, Cyberklaw! I look forward to these, they make my day! I wanna see this story to the end :)
I really appreciate your content, Cyberklaw! I look forward to these, they make my day! I wanna see this story to the end :)
Thanks for commenting, I appreciate the support! Glad you've been enjoying the story :)
Since finishing this chapter, I have been doing a lot of writing and I'm happy to say that I have finished the next two parts already. Well, the first drafts anyway. Hopefully I'll get them posted soon.
And yeah, truths will start to come out for Harvey and Oliver, but not necessarily in a good way...
Since finishing this chapter, I have been doing a lot of writing and I'm happy to say that I have finished the next two parts already. Well, the first drafts anyway. Hopefully I'll get them posted soon.
And yeah, truths will start to come out for Harvey and Oliver, but not necessarily in a good way...
Well, to quote Shakespeare, the course of true love never did run smooth. So, they will face problems, especially when it comes to clearing the past, as you mention. But you'll have to wait and see how bad and difficult those problems will be... :)
But anyway, thanks for taking the time to comment!
But anyway, thanks for taking the time to comment!
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