Huh, it's quite hard to read by someone, who
s native language isn't english. ^^'
I missed few things, but as much as I did understand of this, looks nice. ^^'

Just hoping a littlebit more simple text, but I can't blame you. ^^

Write more. :3

Thank you for your comment.
Yes, I could see how that kind of text would be hard if your native tongue is not English.

wow relay good I Got a great feeling for the hunt. You know kinda that deeper meaning of not as much a hunt for food as i sensed a under-meaning of a hunt for ones personal desires.


Or maybe i am looking in too deep either way i love your style and the flow was great, You relay felt the rhythm in your writeing.

Thanks! I used to ask the folks I showed this one to whether or not they could figure out who it was about.

I think the flow thing is the most important part for me, I tend to write these as one piece, kind of let them build up and then swoosh! All in one go, or I leave them unfinished.

I think the reason for that is that if I let myself start tweaking and adjusting too much, I know I won't stop until I have an overworked mess.