for pollux (uncertain_Certainty on deviant) Jeeze, its been a long time since I last did a tf poem. A REALLY long time. I dont think ive lost my knack though. I talked about doing this earlier and then just HAD to see it through....Some content (one line) may offend some people. but then, some people get offended if you breath within a mile of them, so, meh, whatcha gonna do?
Category Poetry / Transformation
Species Wolf
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 1.8 kB
Well it does rhyme but other than that, it suffers from a serious lack of flow. Trying to read it leaves me with an odd series of pauses. My recommendation is working it over so that is reads more nicely, if you cannot always rhyme its alright.
Rhyming couplets a poem does not make.
Rhyming couplets a poem does not make.
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