Whoa. :3

wut you think?

I think it's very good. But I'm kinda scared for the guy peaking over the edge... X3

Wait a minute...he's not gonna like...push him down there, is he? *twiddles paws nervously*

well yeah, thats like the whole point!

*gasps and covers eyes*

But...but... *cries*

(;3)

Hmmm. Although I do like the cryptically macabre atmosphere, I seem to have missed the point of the ending....

So, the one peering over the edge is pushed by the other and falls to his death?

I think this might have become clear to me if the "pusher" in the upper panel had not been leaning against the tree, but had been approaching or sneaking up behind the other; in other words, if his intention to push had been conveyed by the image.

yeah, i guess it would have been more clear if i had done that! thanks for your input, ill remember it for the future!

sometimes it better not to know the answer! thats what i was thinking when i made it.

Maybe he gets saved by a third party! Ambiguity ROCKS! :D

Crazy idea over both these pages. And by crazy, I mean brilliant. :> You got quite a mind to cook up something like this, and draw it too.

thank yew, that means alot!

yeah, it scares me sometimes. i gots like a whole bunch of stuff thats never gunna see the light of day cuz i dont even get it!

hey why are we here? pretty much to share art and give and recive feedback, good and bad! i just love it when people give me advice! I want others to tell me if what im doing works or doesnt and where i need to improve.

now, yeah i never was truley happy on how this page turned out. the image in my head was waaaay cooler! to me it seems too big and too heavy on the black, maybe if i brought it in closer and turned it into a few panels instead.

thumbnails and drafts seem like a good idea! yesh, let us improve!

Wolfie raised an important point:


> Maybe he gets saved by a third
> party! Ambiguity ROCKS! :D


When you leave the ending up to the reader, unless you have carefully set up an *inevitable* finale, the reader is free to assume that anything could happen -- and the reader would be absolutely right, because you have given that reader the freedom to end your story for you.

With that in mind... if you had ended with an image of the pusher pushing the pushee, with the pushee's eyes opening wide and his body teetering on the edge, then the reader would most likely *have* to assume that the pushee fell to his death -- because that would be the ending that you have spelled out clearly through your images.

Pusher, pushee... I apologize for these highly esoteric critical terms. ;)

Mark