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Finally, the Miami Herald's main website was searched to see if they had something to say about the last kaiju.
This time, the Camo soldiers were expecting a rescue exploit, and thus weren't that surprised to find an article according to which the frog left his swamp to wander close to the coasts, and, when a private yacht got too close to reefs and began to sink, saved it.
They weren't surprised either to read that the abnormally huge and humanoid amphibian received a hero's welcome for this, and a name: Frank.
Offick's frown amplified.
"Colonel?" asked a Camo, seeing the frown.
"My theory's getting more and more probable..." muttered the colonel.
"What theory?"
"Four kaijus appear all of a sudden, clearly animals that mutated, and their first action - after showing off - is to help people? Not credible."
"What do you mean?"
"If that transformation was recent, they sure as hell would be rampaging, even if only because they were panicking."
"You mean, you think the transformation wasn't recent?"
"Yeah, that they got used to it, to their sapience, and more importantly, to human contact. The possibility they were uplifted by humans, somehow, is now the most probable."
"That's your theory?"
"Yes, and I don't like it much. If they were created, then for what?"
A chilling silence followed.
"Open a channel to the other teams. I'll order them to stay at a distance of their targets and observe the situation. We, on the other hand, are going to try to talk to that rooster. If it works, they'll do the same."
"Yessir."
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Frank © me
Finally, the Miami Herald's main website was searched to see if they had something to say about the last kaiju.
This time, the Camo soldiers were expecting a rescue exploit, and thus weren't that surprised to find an article according to which the frog left his swamp to wander close to the coasts, and, when a private yacht got too close to reefs and began to sink, saved it.
They weren't surprised either to read that the abnormally huge and humanoid amphibian received a hero's welcome for this, and a name: Frank.
Offick's frown amplified.
"Colonel?" asked a Camo, seeing the frown.
"My theory's getting more and more probable..." muttered the colonel.
"What theory?"
"Four kaijus appear all of a sudden, clearly animals that mutated, and their first action - after showing off - is to help people? Not credible."
"What do you mean?"
"If that transformation was recent, they sure as hell would be rampaging, even if only because they were panicking."
"You mean, you think the transformation wasn't recent?"
"Yeah, that they got used to it, to their sapience, and more importantly, to human contact. The possibility they were uplifted by humans, somehow, is now the most probable."
"That's your theory?"
"Yes, and I don't like it much. If they were created, then for what?"
A chilling silence followed.
"Open a channel to the other teams. I'll order them to stay at a distance of their targets and observe the situation. We, on the other hand, are going to try to talk to that rooster. If it works, they'll do the same."
"Yessir."
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SpiderDaSquirrelFrank © me
Category Artwork (Digital) / Macro / Micro
Species Kaiju / Giant Monster
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File Size 237.1 kB
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Hey there, it's me again! I'm back for my review for the final chapter of Uncanny Guardians! It's been a little bit longer since my last review than the previous gaps, sorry about that. Things have just been a bit busy lately, but I have some spare time now, so I'd more than ready to jump back in!
Following on from the previous chapters, it's much the same formula, at least to begin with. Not that there's anything inherently bad with that though, sure it is slightly restricting to creativity, but given that the setting and situation, it works quite adequately. As you yourself lampshade, Camo Squadron is expecting to find a tale of heroism! Lo and behold, they do indeed!
I'll be fairly brief with the first section of this chapter, due to its short length, but I do have some comments! Firstly, as previously mentioned, the use of a real world brand adds a lot to the story, so nice touch there! Secondly, the disaster in this chapter isn't really much to talk about, but at the same time, I get the feeling that it's not supposed to be. I think the way you've written it could be slightly better, the '(and see pictures)' line feels ever so slightly... odd? I don't think that's quite the way to say it, but hopefully you know what I mean! It just feels slightly... redundant? Maybe a mention of the what the image is, and why it's worth explicitly mentioning? Ah, I'm not quite sure, sorry. Still, staying positive, it's hardly as if it's bad writing at all, on the contrary, it's perfectly enjoyable to read! Plus, it does show a little bit of this Kaiju's personality - Frank, as we learn his name. Wandering along the coast and taking in the sights is often said to be very calming and invigorating, refreshing. It's a very... human thing to do.
Speaking of which, we now move into the much more intriguing section of the chapter! In the plane, Offick seems to have reached a conclusion, and it is not a comforting one. These Kaiju - obviously animals who have changed and grown to such immense sizes, already something that was supposed to be impossible - have appeared from nowhere, and not only are they completely unafraid by their enormous sizes, but their first instinct is to come to the aid of people around them. They have no trepidation or fear around humanity, or even around large cities. As Offick notes, this implies that not only is this not the first time they have grown to such great sizes, but also that they are familiar with human contact. There can only be one explanation for that - they were created by humans. Which begs the question: Why?
This is an absolutely fantastic piece of writing here, if I do say so myself! The theory Offick has makes perfect sense, and it further shows that Offick's no fool. Not to mention that it draws the readers in, providing a mystery, which will be revealed in due time...
For now though, Offick has a plan - if they're used to human contact, then surely they can be communicated with? It's worth a shot...
There is one thing I find slightly vague about the last bit, what does Offick mean when the other teams should 'stay behind and wait'? They've already taken off, correct? So, he just means that they should hold their position when they land, right? Anyway, other than that, nothing really humps out at me, and I have no concerns of criticisms!
Overall, this was a great chapter, and a great little series of short chapters for this part of the story! They advanced the plot really well, and gave us tiny little snapshots of the Kaiju, in a different way than the briefing did, which is very true of reality, is it not? This part of Kaiju Rising was short, but it was short in a good way. Short, sweet, and setting up the next chapter of the story! Keep up the great work man, and I'll catch you in my next review!
Following on from the previous chapters, it's much the same formula, at least to begin with. Not that there's anything inherently bad with that though, sure it is slightly restricting to creativity, but given that the setting and situation, it works quite adequately. As you yourself lampshade, Camo Squadron is expecting to find a tale of heroism! Lo and behold, they do indeed!
I'll be fairly brief with the first section of this chapter, due to its short length, but I do have some comments! Firstly, as previously mentioned, the use of a real world brand adds a lot to the story, so nice touch there! Secondly, the disaster in this chapter isn't really much to talk about, but at the same time, I get the feeling that it's not supposed to be. I think the way you've written it could be slightly better, the '(and see pictures)' line feels ever so slightly... odd? I don't think that's quite the way to say it, but hopefully you know what I mean! It just feels slightly... redundant? Maybe a mention of the what the image is, and why it's worth explicitly mentioning? Ah, I'm not quite sure, sorry. Still, staying positive, it's hardly as if it's bad writing at all, on the contrary, it's perfectly enjoyable to read! Plus, it does show a little bit of this Kaiju's personality - Frank, as we learn his name. Wandering along the coast and taking in the sights is often said to be very calming and invigorating, refreshing. It's a very... human thing to do.
Speaking of which, we now move into the much more intriguing section of the chapter! In the plane, Offick seems to have reached a conclusion, and it is not a comforting one. These Kaiju - obviously animals who have changed and grown to such immense sizes, already something that was supposed to be impossible - have appeared from nowhere, and not only are they completely unafraid by their enormous sizes, but their first instinct is to come to the aid of people around them. They have no trepidation or fear around humanity, or even around large cities. As Offick notes, this implies that not only is this not the first time they have grown to such great sizes, but also that they are familiar with human contact. There can only be one explanation for that - they were created by humans. Which begs the question: Why?
This is an absolutely fantastic piece of writing here, if I do say so myself! The theory Offick has makes perfect sense, and it further shows that Offick's no fool. Not to mention that it draws the readers in, providing a mystery, which will be revealed in due time...
For now though, Offick has a plan - if they're used to human contact, then surely they can be communicated with? It's worth a shot...
There is one thing I find slightly vague about the last bit, what does Offick mean when the other teams should 'stay behind and wait'? They've already taken off, correct? So, he just means that they should hold their position when they land, right? Anyway, other than that, nothing really humps out at me, and I have no concerns of criticisms!
Overall, this was a great chapter, and a great little series of short chapters for this part of the story! They advanced the plot really well, and gave us tiny little snapshots of the Kaiju, in a different way than the briefing did, which is very true of reality, is it not? This part of Kaiju Rising was short, but it was short in a good way. Short, sweet, and setting up the next chapter of the story! Keep up the great work man, and I'll catch you in my next review!
Hey there!
Ooh, those changes are really cool, they're small, but wow, they actually add quite a lot! Heh, yeah, here's hoping the next review will be faster too! Hopefully university work won't get in the way!
All joking aside though, it's absolutely no problem at all, it's my pleasure! I mean, the idea of even the possibility of helping you improve your writing fills me with a joy I can't even describe, but the joy of reading your fantastic works is absolutely wonderful! Honestly, I should be thanking you for creating such brilliant works! So, thank you!
Ooh, those changes are really cool, they're small, but wow, they actually add quite a lot! Heh, yeah, here's hoping the next review will be faster too! Hopefully university work won't get in the way!
All joking aside though, it's absolutely no problem at all, it's my pleasure! I mean, the idea of even the possibility of helping you improve your writing fills me with a joy I can't even describe, but the joy of reading your fantastic works is absolutely wonderful! Honestly, I should be thanking you for creating such brilliant works! So, thank you!
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