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Four of seven for Halloweek.
I chose a sonnet form for this one. The sonnet is a combination of the Shakespearean and Petrarchan forms, using a bit of the rhyme scheme from each.
Using snow in a poem was requested by a friend. She does not have an FA account, or I would give her a shout-out. x3
I chose a sonnet form for this one. The sonnet is a combination of the Shakespearean and Petrarchan forms, using a bit of the rhyme scheme from each.
Using snow in a poem was requested by a friend. She does not have an FA account, or I would give her a shout-out. x3
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 630 B
You're way too good at making these. :b
I seriously love the word choice you made on this. It would be so much different if you had changed a single thing... :D
I wanna do some kind of thing for winter coming up, in the Christmas/Holiday spirit; only make it twisted and violent. :B
Well, keep doin' whatcha love.
I seriously love the word choice you made on this. It would be so much different if you had changed a single thing... :D
I wanna do some kind of thing for winter coming up, in the Christmas/Holiday spirit; only make it twisted and violent. :B
Well, keep doin' whatcha love.
I'm loving your personification of snow in this sonnet-hybrid; the 2nd quatrain does a MARVELOUS job with it. :3
Also, your word choice is quite nice; the alliteration in this poem is vivid: "perfect preservation / womb
without warmth"
Lastly, I think the allusion of Lazarus was a good way to retain the overall subject AND set your poem up for its comical ending couplet, which has perfect iambic pentameter! ;D
I likes me some nature poems! :U
Also, your word choice is quite nice; the alliteration in this poem is vivid: "perfect preservation / womb
without warmth"
Lastly, I think the allusion of Lazarus was a good way to retain the overall subject AND set your poem up for its comical ending couplet, which has perfect iambic pentameter! ;D
I likes me some nature poems! :U
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