FA+
Shop
188
Views
Views
3
Favorites
Favorites
Category
Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120
File Size 1.1 kB
Report this content
More from Scier
The second of my Halloween poetry for the week. This is a more intricate, less humorous piece than the last.
The title is a play on words. Homicide means the killing of a man. Homo is the species name for we humans, and so the title basically means the killing of humanity.
The title is a play on words. Homicide means the killing of a man. Homo is the species name for we humans, and so the title basically means the killing of humanity.
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 1.1 kB
Crownley's right about one thing, this poem as a STRONG ending, and I LOVES me a strong ending! =OOverall, I think this is a good piece of work; though, do excuse me for saying the horror genre isn't my cup of tea! ^^;
The use of enjambment in line 4 worked wonderfully! :3
The way you tackled this concept is praiseworthy, and your images are very strong:
"Man's fragile age has been eclipsed at last."
This line seems to stand out (in a good way of course) the most. =)
Very nice! ;3
Comments