Great story, and from a perspective we don't see enough of in the Transformation community. Sure, you have a new look,but how will society regard you? This is a question that I've seen many people brush off along the lines of "People in New York City see crazier things every day," which comes off to me as a bit lazy in writing. Even New Yorkers are bound to notice a walking, talking fox with realistic movements of the maw, ears, and tail as out of the norm even if that place is as crazy as people claim.

Also, that nanomachines bit made me smile. "NANOMACHINES, SON!"