A torrent of fire erupts from my clenched fist as I lay my sights on my opponent across form me, leaping into the air to dodge my burning fury. He brought this on himself my face said as I roar a terrifying green flame column from my mouth following his every movement. “WHY MUST YOU DO THIS” he barked at me, slashing blades of water at me blocking my attempts to slam my fire upon him. “Because you murdered my wife” I said with a blank expression “I will take your life or your family’s life” I twirl back as I light the ground afire.

this is just a small part of it. i would like to know what you the people think, any constructive crtiqe..remeber CONSTRUCTIVE.