this is one i did in class. originally, it had a sad ending in which you didnt win the race, but i didnt like it, so i scrapped that idea.
Category Poetry / All
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yay for happy endings. good one. I was never into track and field myself. Not a big sports nut used to play lacross, soccer, tennis and badminton. lost interest when things started to hurt all the time. I like it and it can be read at a fast pace. The poem itself seems to be running its own race so i think you really captured the event well. *hugs*
These days so do I. I like to watch motor cycle and car racing sometimes but thats about the lot. I was a race matial in New Zealand for a while so I guess not everything is boring. I can teach the younguns how to pass or kick a football, and stuff I know spots wise if I'm asked but try to avoid it these days.
Arthritis One, Sports Zero. lol. writing and reading much more fun.
Arthritis One, Sports Zero. lol. writing and reading much more fun.
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