I think you did a good job rendering the entire picture but i think you would benefit from applying a blur on the background details. You have the characters who need fullscreen to see entirely with a background that needs to be seen from afar.

Photoshop CS6 has a free trial (that you can stretch out forever 0w0' hehe...) and it has a tool that will slightly blurr out those chunky details ^^

The clouds look beautiful! They would look even better if you light them twards the moon as blue and twards the town as orange. light from cities can be seen from space, and how clouds work is that they reflect and refract light 0w0' so adding a slight tint of orange in the shade of the moon would make everything pop out but also help ground your image!

0w0 i LOVE your rocks

-w- I really like that brush you used to make the clouds and rocks... dont suppose you use SAI hmmm?

Thanks for the advice)) I have photoshop, and one of the last works I used the blur, this work is relatively old, and then I just thought that the blur was there unnecessary, probably I was wrong hehe ^_^

You wonder what brush I drew stones and clouds?

Yes indeed i do ewe hu hu hu

also by i love your background and the depth in it O<O

this is a brush with Fuzystatic texture
I draw in SAI 1 and here are the detailed settings of the brush I painted the background))

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r.....3M7F3MpWBRIFB_

0w0 I too draw in sai and tidy in photoshop

Ах, эта сказочная работа)