A very unusual and attractive art style!

Thankyou.

yup .. .and yeyy for colors ... nicely done

I did it to procrastinate on a history assignment. I think I took an especially long time on the finishing stages.

I like it. :> And I agree with Ronno; your art is so interesting because the style is so different. This is a great example of this.

Thankyou. I think that from experience you know my favourite compliment.

The cold night and you returning home... Dead gray-yelllowish leaves on the wet asphalt....
Yeah, I felt this mood while watching this pic.

Thankyou. Actually, I still get chills whenever I look at this. It might be because I posed for a picture which I used as a reference, and I remember the night.

Very neat work. The simple drawing style with one type of line width works well with this.

I like the little details and patterns, like the dots on the cement, and the hatching on the clouds.
Colors and border look nice too. It's got that cold feeling to it.

Thankyou. At the moment I only have one black inky pen which I use for everything, but I really would like to figure out inking with nibs eventually. Whatever it means, I think this represents the peak of my artistic ability . . .

If I were to spend a months worth of practice on one skill, what should I improve on, do you think?

Hm, from looking through the rest of your gallery, it's hard to say.
It seems like you've developed your own stylistic approach using straight lines, geometric shapes, and solid colors.
This isn't a bad thing at all. It looks nice, and it has a unique feel to it.

If I could give you any advice (and I'm no expert on the subject), I'd say do practices with different variations of lines (thin, thick, nonexistent). Maybe try drawing very small, thus limiting the amount of strokes you make.

I can say, that the following works are the most impressive to me:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2442434/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2487308/

These two seem to use very thin lines, or no lines at all. Definitely try to sketch on some thin paper, and the draw/paint/marker on top of it.

But really, whatever you do, the more you practice, the better you'll get. No doubt there!