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I finnished writing this just now, it's a full up to date info file on Razor.
I will warn people, this has some of my scientific stuff in it, and some will find it odd, but I created my dragons as a complete species, so I've designed EVERYTHING about them.
I realy hope people see it as scientific, because there's alot more scientific stuff I'll be sneaking in here and there.
I also believe in a negative for every positive, that explains some of this file.
I will warn people, this has some of my scientific stuff in it, and some will find it odd, but I created my dragons as a complete species, so I've designed EVERYTHING about them.
I realy hope people see it as scientific, because there's alot more scientific stuff I'll be sneaking in here and there.
I also believe in a negative for every positive, that explains some of this file.
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I will download it and read it. I shall tell you what I think.
Later I will be explaining how their flight muscles, and their fire breath works.
However, this story is very cool. You are a good writer, don´t forget to keep practicing!
I have mild dyslexia dysgraphia, so I have to check and re-check my spelling and grammar.
I will be running stuff through an editor when I build my web site.
If you have questions, I'll be glad to answer them, and suggestions are welcome too ^.=.^
You are going to do a WebSite? Cool, can´t wait to see it... XD
And about the questions and suggestions that I can send you, I will bear it in mind.
Now, is it possible that Razor can do something about his tendons?
While doing research I found out how tendons effect the power a muscle can transmit to the bone, It's possible to train up stronger tendons, but it's still got limitations. Razor is pretty much at the limits of his development, his tendons can't get any stronger because the fibers would need to be larger, and they can't grow larger than they already are.
That explanation about the tendons is pretty interesting, I didn´t know about it and now I do!
Another question, how long can Razor and the other dragons, in your story, live? I enjoy the longevity of this creatures.
Razor might not even live that long, I'm not even considering killing him at the end of the story. But despite his incredible physical condition, he's been through alot, and there are things that where done to him that haven't helped him. He's got alot of scars, both physical and mental. On top of that he was used as a test subject in a number of experiments, because of his special genetics it was thought they could "extract" that part and make more titan dragons. Instead they messed up his brain chemistry, he needs injections every day so he doesn't die.
I plan on writing more about this stuff, but if you have anymore questions feel free to ask.
Razor's life is very sad, even about the experiments. Of course, dragons have a very high strength within. And he is not the exception to the rule!
About your next stuff, I´ll be waiting for it without trouble. You are a cool genius, I think indeed.