There we go, now I can see it. The muzzle is, again, great. The ears are well placed...well...ear. And the body is good all together. But. One thing you might want to do is to try and make your own way of making eyes. Or your favorite. And I don't mean the shape of the eye. But the highlights and how the color and pupils are made. I personally love the style Bones used in Wolf's Rain and I use that because I like it so much. <3

That and remember that the hair isn't always jagged like that and the eye isn't visable under the bangs. Otherwise you're getting pretty good.

Thanks for the critique, it's something I really need right now. But yea one of my main problems is hair, I really never learned how to draw I just picked up a pencil and tried to draw something, thus my icon is the finished result. Plus I started drawing sometime mid may x3. But the problem with that is everything I do was self taught and once I drew hair it kind of grew on me (no pun intended) and it's hard to break a habit like that. I also know about the hair not being visable but I wanted to show the new style of his eye. But again I really appreciate the critique =3

You're welcome, and if it works for you, go for it, just try to improve a little every once in a while and you'll do fine