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Raven bassist lineart (WIP, need help!)

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posted 16 years ago Musician

I was experimenting several hours with sketching and these seem to be my only show-worthy attemps....but I still displeased with it.
I need some opinions and/or suggestions to improve this or a hint which one to continue with.

Reference: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2828273/

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Rallow ~rallow

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16 years ago

I like the one on the left more, not sure about ways to improve it though.

Firebrand99 ~firebrand99

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16 years ago

Thanks, that helped
But do you think it needs some major improvement?

Rallow ~rallow

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16 years ago

I wouldn't say it needs much improvement at all, it's good.

Firebrand99 ~firebrand99

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16 years ago

Why thanks again! I think I'll still wait until tomorrow. Maybe I'll get some further opinions and advices.
There's still lots of other stuff to do.^^

deslacoda ~deslacoda

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16 years ago

Try Flipping your image horizontally, it can reveal mistakes you got used to whilst drawing, l like imbalanced eyes, etc.

Or try doing bird dudes using the bottom beak as the 'jawline' instead, for more deffinition between the neck and the head.

Firebrand99 ~firebrand99

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16 years ago

Hmm, sounds quite evident. I'll try that.
Thank you!

Nogaron ~nogaron

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16 years ago

The eyes on the left image looks good. They look more bird like to me.

Firebrand99 ~firebrand99

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16 years ago

yeah, they r more raven-like. I tried to make them a bit falcon-like at the right one^^
Thanks for the feedback. I've made a new sketch today, but I hadn't time to submit it yet.

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