... I didn't think Silver's insanity had to do with violation, but ok. That's very interesting..

This chapter was funny. Chip backhanding Sonic, especially. xD

The "Violation" wasn't just physical. It was mental as well. The fact that it's fueled by an insane jealousy makes it worse. =P

IT HAD TO BE DONE. Chip loves that fountain and the chocolate in it. XD

I can just imagine Chip bathing in it.

Hmm. I like where this is going.

(cheers) X3

...I'm sorry, the violation part was funny to me orz


Elise reminds me of Noel. HMMMMM

All right, I finally got off my lazy ass and read through every chapter you've written thus far.

Here's what I can say. It's really interesting, and has a very nice flow to it. Sometimes the details (like for scenes and characters) are slightly vague, and it seems like you use loads of different words in order to avoid repeating yourself (there's no shame in some repitition), but other than that, you've got something great going on here. Keep it up!