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Rush the fallen Firebird who does her heart belongs to
Firebirds only set with some colors
Firebirds all can use Fire magic to burn their enemys
Firebirds all sirver their empress
Firebirds live for a long, long time before reborning again.
Firebird Rush does not have the power of fire, and does not wish ti give her life for a empress who has done so much horrar to the world, she train her self to be stronge and using a magic protective gemstone on her sword she can reflech almost all spells back to who sent them.
Gem of Protectsion: a powerful old gem stone that non can use unless they have no magic at all, and a stronge will, the test ot if is to feel as if your being burn alive, frozon in ice, burred alive with no air. past them and the Gem will protect you from spells.
Cloak of unseen: a magic cloak that once was one of the empress's items of use, but sold away long ago.
it power was to hid its owner in a shadow so if anyone saw their face that would not know them, even if the person is the most wanted in the world or known. it was use to spy on the firebird people by its empress, but she even lost it or sold it.
Gem of Locks: the gem of locks can be use to unlock doors or lock them or luck or unlock anything, it is part of Rush's clothes so only one or her can unlock her own clothes, non other can non can even rip the clothes couse of the Gem of Locks, Rush body is only for one person, the one who stole her heart and soul.
Rush the Firebird: a firebird that unable to use her fire magic or any, she train hard all her life to use a sword, and after a long time and learning from master swordsmen she become one almost, she need 3 more to learn, to cut steal, so she must learn not to cut.
to cut the wind, so when shw swings her sword anything before her of magic or weapons will blow back or be cut.
to beat a Master Swordsmen in battle to gain teh title of Master Swordsmen.
Rush has lived for the empress all her life, but she felt it was not what she should be doing, as the empress only hurt others and Rush heart was too big to not feel their pain, she wanted to help them all.
so at times when she was orded to kill she did not, she let them go fighting her own, and put in a cell untill she was let out, she has only been a lieutenant of the firebird army, yer she was never promoted for her disloyalty to the empress's orders to kill.
one day Rush was set in part of a watchout tower, that had captured the enermy known as Tyamet, the others thought they had her under a control spell, but thanks to Rush's swordtraining she knew Tyamet wasn't.
she ask the others to leave and lock the door still she knocks for them, and when she was left alone she began to fight Tyamet, but she was no match for her spells, sent atthis time she did not have any of the magic items she later gets.
Tyamet has Rush pin to the wall as she right hand begin to glow black of magic to steal Rush's soul, and as Rush looks at the lizard she just says in a repliy and close her eyes "just do it"
This couse the Lizard Tyamet to stop and begin to ask questions, and as Rush answered with her feelings not to harm and hate for the empress rule, Tyamet begins to let her go, yet Tyamet told Rush if she joins her then she must know of things.
Tyamet told Rush her plans and the grand plan for all firebirds once she won the war between her and the empress, then Tyamet ask her for her answer.
Rush knew the empress needed to pay for everything, but to every firebird as well even her, she felt unsure to the lest of it.
she then looks at the Lizard all over as the lizard Tyamet was striped nude, it was what everyone in the world done to ones who put under a mind control spell, to be evil to others and disrepecful to them.
Rush eyes comes to the lizard's eyes and what seem forever to her she was lost in her gaze, Rush begin to feel weak in the knees, yet she shock it off and said she will follow Tyamet.
Rush frist order was to take out every Firebird in the watchout Tower but leave some for her to steal their souls, Rush did as she said but Rush did not kill any she knocked them out thanks to her great sword training.
and Tyamet took all their souls, but then Rush came up to fight a commander firebird and was knock down, the spells of fire by this one was too stronge even for her sword training.
but Tyamet come up behind the commander and took her soul.
the left the tower with every firebird from it under her control over 60 of them, Tyamet then later after a week of Rush loyalty to her, gave her the magic items to help her be more effective in battles.
but Tyamet did not show any feelings or love for anyone of the Firebirds, yet she was some what kind to the ones who freely sirve her of their own free will, Rush was one of them who mind was still hers who soul was still hers.
yet Rush wanted something more from Tyamet, she felt in her heart she wanted Tyamet to love her, but she felt Tyamet's hate for firebirds if she told her, she would just even kill her or remove her soul or wrip her mind.
Rush didn't care what happens to her as long as she was by Tyamet's side untill she dies, she wanted to sirve Tyamet forever and ever.
then one day in Tyamet's room she tells her, her feelings to her she tells Tyamet she loves her and she doesn't care what she does to her or the plans she does to beat the empress or the fate for all firebirds, she just wants to be by Tyamet's side forever to sirve her for all her life.
Tyamet shock to this but looks at her and then she tells Rush to return to her room the next night for her answer to this, she has alot to think about.
and so Rush does as orded to, and that next night Rush enters Tyamet's room.
(( This is the hard work I put on Rush the Firebird, what becomes of her now will be up to ChaosCroc I work hard on this char but felt it was no good with each idea I had, so ChaosCroc please read this all, if you can't understand ask me, I will try to explain.
also think carefully on what will happen to Rush, I made Rush to be the only one who do anything for one person out of love, a traject love, that mite lead her to her end or happyness.
that choice is yours sent Tyamet belongs to you and so does the story of Titan Chapter.
I also hope you likethat I tryed to draw her how you draw your Firebirds. ))
Rush the Firebird belongs to Me Runhurd/Runnhurd/Runnic
Tyamet, Firebirds, the empess of Firebirds and Titan Chapter belongs to ChaosCroc
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/chaoscroc
Firebirds all can use Fire magic to burn their enemys
Firebirds all sirver their empress
Firebirds live for a long, long time before reborning again.
Firebird Rush does not have the power of fire, and does not wish ti give her life for a empress who has done so much horrar to the world, she train her self to be stronge and using a magic protective gemstone on her sword she can reflech almost all spells back to who sent them.
Gem of Protectsion: a powerful old gem stone that non can use unless they have no magic at all, and a stronge will, the test ot if is to feel as if your being burn alive, frozon in ice, burred alive with no air. past them and the Gem will protect you from spells.
Cloak of unseen: a magic cloak that once was one of the empress's items of use, but sold away long ago.
it power was to hid its owner in a shadow so if anyone saw their face that would not know them, even if the person is the most wanted in the world or known. it was use to spy on the firebird people by its empress, but she even lost it or sold it.
Gem of Locks: the gem of locks can be use to unlock doors or lock them or luck or unlock anything, it is part of Rush's clothes so only one or her can unlock her own clothes, non other can non can even rip the clothes couse of the Gem of Locks, Rush body is only for one person, the one who stole her heart and soul.
Rush the Firebird: a firebird that unable to use her fire magic or any, she train hard all her life to use a sword, and after a long time and learning from master swordsmen she become one almost, she need 3 more to learn, to cut steal, so she must learn not to cut.
to cut the wind, so when shw swings her sword anything before her of magic or weapons will blow back or be cut.
to beat a Master Swordsmen in battle to gain teh title of Master Swordsmen.
Rush has lived for the empress all her life, but she felt it was not what she should be doing, as the empress only hurt others and Rush heart was too big to not feel their pain, she wanted to help them all.
so at times when she was orded to kill she did not, she let them go fighting her own, and put in a cell untill she was let out, she has only been a lieutenant of the firebird army, yer she was never promoted for her disloyalty to the empress's orders to kill.
one day Rush was set in part of a watchout tower, that had captured the enermy known as Tyamet, the others thought they had her under a control spell, but thanks to Rush's swordtraining she knew Tyamet wasn't.
she ask the others to leave and lock the door still she knocks for them, and when she was left alone she began to fight Tyamet, but she was no match for her spells, sent atthis time she did not have any of the magic items she later gets.
Tyamet has Rush pin to the wall as she right hand begin to glow black of magic to steal Rush's soul, and as Rush looks at the lizard she just says in a repliy and close her eyes "just do it"
This couse the Lizard Tyamet to stop and begin to ask questions, and as Rush answered with her feelings not to harm and hate for the empress rule, Tyamet begins to let her go, yet Tyamet told Rush if she joins her then she must know of things.
Tyamet told Rush her plans and the grand plan for all firebirds once she won the war between her and the empress, then Tyamet ask her for her answer.
Rush knew the empress needed to pay for everything, but to every firebird as well even her, she felt unsure to the lest of it.
she then looks at the Lizard all over as the lizard Tyamet was striped nude, it was what everyone in the world done to ones who put under a mind control spell, to be evil to others and disrepecful to them.
Rush eyes comes to the lizard's eyes and what seem forever to her she was lost in her gaze, Rush begin to feel weak in the knees, yet she shock it off and said she will follow Tyamet.
Rush frist order was to take out every Firebird in the watchout Tower but leave some for her to steal their souls, Rush did as she said but Rush did not kill any she knocked them out thanks to her great sword training.
and Tyamet took all their souls, but then Rush came up to fight a commander firebird and was knock down, the spells of fire by this one was too stronge even for her sword training.
but Tyamet come up behind the commander and took her soul.
the left the tower with every firebird from it under her control over 60 of them, Tyamet then later after a week of Rush loyalty to her, gave her the magic items to help her be more effective in battles.
but Tyamet did not show any feelings or love for anyone of the Firebirds, yet she was some what kind to the ones who freely sirve her of their own free will, Rush was one of them who mind was still hers who soul was still hers.
yet Rush wanted something more from Tyamet, she felt in her heart she wanted Tyamet to love her, but she felt Tyamet's hate for firebirds if she told her, she would just even kill her or remove her soul or wrip her mind.
Rush didn't care what happens to her as long as she was by Tyamet's side untill she dies, she wanted to sirve Tyamet forever and ever.
then one day in Tyamet's room she tells her, her feelings to her she tells Tyamet she loves her and she doesn't care what she does to her or the plans she does to beat the empress or the fate for all firebirds, she just wants to be by Tyamet's side forever to sirve her for all her life.
Tyamet shock to this but looks at her and then she tells Rush to return to her room the next night for her answer to this, she has alot to think about.
and so Rush does as orded to, and that next night Rush enters Tyamet's room.
(( This is the hard work I put on Rush the Firebird, what becomes of her now will be up to ChaosCroc I work hard on this char but felt it was no good with each idea I had, so ChaosCroc please read this all, if you can't understand ask me, I will try to explain.
also think carefully on what will happen to Rush, I made Rush to be the only one who do anything for one person out of love, a traject love, that mite lead her to her end or happyness.
that choice is yours sent Tyamet belongs to you and so does the story of Titan Chapter.
I also hope you likethat I tryed to draw her how you draw your Firebirds. ))
Rush the Firebird belongs to Me Runhurd/Runnhurd/Runnic
Tyamet, Firebirds, the empess of Firebirds and Titan Chapter belongs to ChaosCroc
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/chaoscroc
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One: She is a red firebird, red firebirds are the WEAKEST of the firebirds. They can still use fire magic though but they are still really weak. So sayng she has no magic skills is a little odd since you know she needs to know some fire magic to be a firebird. I can see why she would use a sword to protect herself but she still needs a little bit of magic in her to be a firebird.
Two: Tyamet is racised bitch. Sure she would keep Rush as a pet or follower, but it would take longer than a WEEK for her to trust another firebird. The firebirds killed off much of the lizards! Even with that, Tyamet still has trust issues with her friends, even Catalina. So yeah a week of goodness will not melt Tyamets heart. Rush needs to work a lot harder than that.
Thrid: Ricky said no love stuff with his characters. This is still implying Rush has a crush on Tyamet, you know he doesn't want that. You know I even expect Tyamet to kill Rush for showing such a weakness to her.
Four: Rush isn't going to be a main character in Titian chapter so she wont be with Tyamet for long in the story. If she wants to follow Tyamet then she needs to be stuck with the other follows. She doesn't take favourites.
I like the design of the character, the outfit looks like something that Tyamet would wear. Most of the followers of Tyamet are naked part from a cape and a belt. Part from that she looks cool, its the bio that needs work, not the design <3
One: She is a red firebird, red firebirds are the WEAKEST of the firebirds. They can still use fire magic though but they are still really weak. So sayng she has no magic skills is a little odd since you know she needs to know some fire magic to be a firebird. I can see why she would use a sword to protect herself but she still needs a little bit of magic in her to be a firebird.
Two: Tyamet is racised bitch. Sure she would keep Rush as a pet or follower, but it would take longer than a WEEK for her to trust another firebird. The firebirds killed off much of the lizards! Even with that, Tyamet still has trust issues with her friends, even Catalina. So yeah a week of goodness will not melt Tyamets heart. Rush needs to work a lot harder than that.
Thrid: Ricky said no love stuff with his characters. This is still implying Rush has a crush on Tyamet, you know he doesn't want that. You know I even expect Tyamet to kill Rush for showing such a weakness to her.
Four: Rush isn't going to be a main character in Titian chapter so she wont be with Tyamet for long in the story. If she wants to follow Tyamet then she needs to be stuck with the other follows. She doesn't take favourites.
I like the design of the character, the outfit looks like something that Tyamet would wear. Most of the followers of Tyamet are naked part from a cape and a belt. Part from that she looks cool, its the bio that needs work, not the design <3
1: she was born with no magic at all, there sometimes would be some that can't use magic even if they are born in the family of firebirds, I just saying this how her story is on all this.
2: the one week thing is only Tyamet giving Rush items to protect her self its not really trusting, as in more like non other can mind control Rush or hurt Rush, or remove Rush clothes but Tyamet, basely just to help Rush not be taken away for being weak at magic.
3: Croc ment full on both Rush does have feelings to Tyamet but I didn't say anything about Tyamet feelings to Rush, only that she took her in part of her group and items there no real feelings from Tyamet that I said here.
and the end part is Croc's choice on what happens there, that where I leaving Rush in Croc's hands even Rush will be killed lose her soul or anything I don't know what happen and after the hard work I put in her and having so many design ideas and story ideas push down into not work, I don't really care what happens to Rush anymore...
4: I know Rush not a main char I didn't make her to be, I just wanted a char that be one of them one in a 10,000,000 that open up to someone that was told to be the enemy, you know like 2 sides hating each other yet 2 hold a small bond, but in the end it all set out what happen by one person's choice. just one of them things to give a side story and if Croc wanted a reason for his Titan Chapter, to have a part where Tyamet tells why she hates teh Firebirds, we all know why I mean maybe he put it down to how it happen how Tyamet became Tyamet so on.
Rush look was mainly to please Tyamet, she tryed hard to make Tyamet happen, even by knocking out as many firebirds or others who try to hurt Tyamet, so she can take their souls.
Rush would die for Tyamet if she orders her to kill her self, Rush would that how deep a char Rush is, she not a main char, she haven't got any feelings from Tyamet, she a hard working char who be in the back, who life is only for Tyamet.
that is in and out Jojo I not changing anything of this Rush's Fate is in Croc's hands now. as a char in his Titan Chapter fate should be his choice.
2: the one week thing is only Tyamet giving Rush items to protect her self its not really trusting, as in more like non other can mind control Rush or hurt Rush, or remove Rush clothes but Tyamet, basely just to help Rush not be taken away for being weak at magic.
3: Croc ment full on both Rush does have feelings to Tyamet but I didn't say anything about Tyamet feelings to Rush, only that she took her in part of her group and items there no real feelings from Tyamet that I said here.
and the end part is Croc's choice on what happens there, that where I leaving Rush in Croc's hands even Rush will be killed lose her soul or anything I don't know what happen and after the hard work I put in her and having so many design ideas and story ideas push down into not work, I don't really care what happens to Rush anymore...
4: I know Rush not a main char I didn't make her to be, I just wanted a char that be one of them one in a 10,000,000 that open up to someone that was told to be the enemy, you know like 2 sides hating each other yet 2 hold a small bond, but in the end it all set out what happen by one person's choice. just one of them things to give a side story and if Croc wanted a reason for his Titan Chapter, to have a part where Tyamet tells why she hates teh Firebirds, we all know why I mean maybe he put it down to how it happen how Tyamet became Tyamet so on.
Rush look was mainly to please Tyamet, she tryed hard to make Tyamet happen, even by knocking out as many firebirds or others who try to hurt Tyamet, so she can take their souls.
Rush would die for Tyamet if she orders her to kill her self, Rush would that how deep a char Rush is, she not a main char, she haven't got any feelings from Tyamet, she a hard working char who be in the back, who life is only for Tyamet.
that is in and out Jojo I not changing anything of this Rush's Fate is in Croc's hands now. as a char in his Titan Chapter fate should be his choice.
1. No firebirds are born without magic in Titian Chapter.
2. Why after a week would Tyamet really trust her enough to give her items? Seriously? If Tyamet didn't trust her why would she help her?
3. Croc NEVER said that. He doesn't want it implied at all. Even Rush crushing onto Tyament.
4. Tyamet doesn't have a bond with a random girl after a week <3
If Rush was in titian chapter, she wouldn't be close to Tyamet at all, she be a follower, nothing more.
2. Why after a week would Tyamet really trust her enough to give her items? Seriously? If Tyamet didn't trust her why would she help her?
3. Croc NEVER said that. He doesn't want it implied at all. Even Rush crushing onto Tyament.
4. Tyamet doesn't have a bond with a random girl after a week <3
If Rush was in titian chapter, she wouldn't be close to Tyamet at all, she be a follower, nothing more.
I know I know but as I said I don't care what happens to her anymore, if Croc use her that ment to be her story, and what happens after that night she enters Tyamet's room, is what happens she even dead or soulless or alive and happy or what ever that it.
sorry if it sound I getting mad I'm not I just tryed to do this that all.
and to say on a week thing, something like Rush been hidding childen of other people somewhere keeping them safe alot that was lizards, she been bringing food and keeping them safe.
and Rush show Tyamet where she hid them hoping she can keep them safe now what you think of that?
sorry if it sound I getting mad I'm not I just tryed to do this that all.
and to say on a week thing, something like Rush been hidding childen of other people somewhere keeping them safe alot that was lizards, she been bringing food and keeping them safe.
and Rush show Tyamet where she hid them hoping she can keep them safe now what you think of that?
I don't think your listening properly To Ricky or Jo. If Ricky has stated NO love implying with his characters then that means NO. Jo has got a good point here and everything she is saying is correct and I'm sure Ricky has told you this himself.
Also this is FA, unlike DA you can't have the option of 'no crit allowed'. On FA you WILL get crit. whether you like it or not. STOP taking it as an -attack-. There is a difference between someone giving you crit to HELP you, then someone attacking you.
Jo, was NOT attacking you. She is making a good point and you go against it. Seriously if you don't want crit, then put it in your description box. I have seen these comments between you two and all I see is Jo making good points and trying to help, but you keep going against her as if to tell her 'You're wrong!' 'No croc didn't say that' etc.
If you don't like people helping or correcting you, then..as harsh as this sounds. DON'T do stuff like this then, because your gonna get people, your doing characters for correcting and helping you all the time.
Also this is FA, unlike DA you can't have the option of 'no crit allowed'. On FA you WILL get crit. whether you like it or not. STOP taking it as an -attack-. There is a difference between someone giving you crit to HELP you, then someone attacking you.
Jo, was NOT attacking you. She is making a good point and you go against it. Seriously if you don't want crit, then put it in your description box. I have seen these comments between you two and all I see is Jo making good points and trying to help, but you keep going against her as if to tell her 'You're wrong!' 'No croc didn't say that' etc.
If you don't like people helping or correcting you, then..as harsh as this sounds. DON'T do stuff like this then, because your gonna get people, your doing characters for correcting and helping you all the time.
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