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Posted: October 15th, 2009 11:26 PM
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( No Subject ) Posted: October 15th, 2009 11:22 PM

I replied four minutes before you uploaded. Damn I'm fast!

I've been using non-photo blue then 7H then ink, so I have a second level of invisible errors.

Left ear seems to curve inward. The skull does not seem to be flattened in like you did in the earlier profile shots. Maybe you should try doing a sequence from front to profile in 10 degree steps and see where you get that distortion.

Not sure what you mean by flattened in, but sure, I could try that.

Hmm I like it. I think you handled this angle very well :) where the chin meets the scarf seems a little blotted but that's the lead being picked up for you. Good sketch with to my eye at least a very nice handling of depth :)

Even though it's messy, it's got a good deal of detail and the perspective is pretty good to boot!

All in all, i don't see any problem with the head, but the armor part at the bottom of the image (i think it's the breastplate) seems to be too up and to her left compared to the rest of the image.

That's the top metal strip of the thorax part of her exoskeleton, and yeah it does look a bit high up.

You know, people complain a lot about 'messy' but I really like sketches like this, they're great for learning little tricks and such, I love your lines, so smooth and.. confident.