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Well, the focus in this chapter is a scenario and questions for which there is no right/perfect way
to go about things. You can only give your own thoughts/interpretation and let others do with it
what they will. That's not to say it would do any harm voicing how you would have gone about it
and the answers you would have given, but as far as "arguing" over how it's done, it's not so much
something that can be argued about, as far as the situation itself.
Like is said in the chapter, to each their own.
to go about things. You can only give your own thoughts/interpretation and let others do with it
what they will. That's not to say it would do any harm voicing how you would have gone about it
and the answers you would have given, but as far as "arguing" over how it's done, it's not so much
something that can be argued about, as far as the situation itself.
Like is said in the chapter, to each their own.
...Tell me, I noticed that none of your characters ate meat, or at least not directly. If you did have such a character around I would say they have their own choices in the mater.
Will you still stick with the words, "To each their own." Once considering such a charter? Or even what it implicates.
Will you still stick with the words, "To each their own." Once considering such a charter? Or even what it implicates.
My point that this brings is the extremes on one side, the houndoom in your story is a good example. It may be an exception to the rule but that is my point. To each their own is a phrase that doesn't work for every situation. The media has a chance to jump on this. Which is partly why I would like another powerful character to get involved. To be a foil for Chris and get him to act more careful on what he says.
It would be easier to add this character before settling down and have this, 'foil' to act naturally to him as a visiter. Think of this guy as a goblin slayer behaviour, but doesn't kill needlessly, have him focus on a situation as horrible instead of something living.
Saying Chris will solve everything seems... pointless to me, and surrounding him in paradise looks to me your ignoring the problem. I can solve this with some writing but this is your story.
It would be easier to add this character before settling down and have this, 'foil' to act naturally to him as a visiter. Think of this guy as a goblin slayer behaviour, but doesn't kill needlessly, have him focus on a situation as horrible instead of something living.
Saying Chris will solve everything seems... pointless to me, and surrounding him in paradise looks to me your ignoring the problem. I can solve this with some writing but this is your story.
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