Darnit! I wasn't first to fave! But still, great work on this. I hope people will learn from this example and give better critique. BTW, your drawing looks way better!

Forgot to mention, the way you do faces is adorable! I shall take this lesson to heart! *is dressed as a kobun*

Thanks a bunch, Midi! I appreciate you sticking with me.

Of course. *slathers some glue on your back* We're buddies, right? *sits in the glue and gets comfy* We gotta stick together.

Uh... I seem to have a squirrel on my back.

Better than a monkey though, right? *peeks over your shoulder* Hey, wat'cha doin? Huh? Huh? Wat'cha doin? Huh?

I know I'm looking forward to future comics ^^

Why thank you, Ellen. I've taken a look at your own comic work, and I must say I'm feeling rather inadequate in comparison. I plan to watch your work from now on, perhaps to gain some inspiration and tips.

But thank you all the same.

I'm flattered, but I've always believed no matter what art style is used, the story is what makes a comic good or not.
Your comic's is clear and is well-written, both skills are hard to learn.

Excellent job here. As always, your work is of incredible quality.
Hope you find I tend to be in the second category...

Well I've never heard you asking me for porn.

I know you wouldn't draw it. And... too much of the fandom is porn. It's good to see an artist who can draw well not falling into that pit.

Thank you, Kasyl. I really appreciate you saying so. If I can some day place myself among the few artists in the fandom who choose not to draw porn, then I'll be happy. :)

Yeah, that's true.

And you are getting better. This comic proves it.

Thank you, DireWolf. :)

You got it.

I like it a lot. I like the clear lines and I think the poses look fairly natural. Also, it's funny.

I still think you should've used MY dialogue. :)

Haha you silly nut. :) Using your dialogue might be hazardous to my health...

You know you want to! ;) I'm great at writing sexy dialogue. :)

Good work Teric! Your line-art just continues to get better and better. I look forward to the day you can look back and see that you have 100 strips, or more, and we can all look over them and enjoy them time and time again, as the fancy hits us... =^.^= A certain amazing quality that art has, that you can do that... I challenge a lot of furries here on FA, that if you haven't already, go back through your favorites... all of them, and look at em all again. See if you would favorite them again, if given the chance... I think so many of us just barely keep up on the web these days, we suffer from information overload... We fail to 'stop and smell the roses' so to speak, and really appreciate the past, as well as the present, work that these skilled artists put up here for us... If I had the artistic skill to make something like this strip that Teric is doing... I'm not certain I could find it in myself to part with it once I had it 'done' (if I ever could consider it done). What these artists do, is give of themselves, to us, the viewers... And all I can do, as a viewer, is stand and applaud *does so, applauding Teric, for this piece* its great, its growing, and thank you for including us in the ride!
*gets off his soapbox, and sets back down, a silly smile on his muzzle*

Okay, that has got to be the most flattering comment anyone has ever given me on FA. What did I do to deserve a friend like you?

Nothing specific =~.^=... J/K.... Teric, you are just yourself, dont ever change who you are! You are a talented tho emerging artist in this community, your talent is the treasure, and we are all glad to see you expressing it here, for all of us to see, and experience with you =^.^= Thanks again for posting for us to view.

sounds like the fandom I know and love :P You're a great artist, keep it up! I'm afraid I don't have much to say in terms of critique -- I'm not an artist myself :P

Heh, which group, that's a good question actually.

So, do you draw porn? *ducks*

Seriously, this is a good comic.

For your first comic, I would say this is very good. Congrats!
As for the story's gist: Nothing to add.

LOL That's funny man. :3

I only have one question. Do you draw porn?




(You must realize I'm joking)

Of course! You know I never would.