Schwarzpelz - Chapter 4 - Part 20
The actual part 20 this time xd
Kind of a double page if it would appear in a comic/manga. But I wanted the big panel of Schwarzi running and it would
have been too small on a regular page.
Bit of a cliffhanger and then one final page for this chapter.
After that I'll like... tone down the whole thing a bit, go for a bit of a relaxed slice-of-life kinda feeling. At this point the
basics for the story have all been established, or... don't really know how to call it, most of the important story related
stuff has been touched so I might have the freedom to get back to some world/character building, after all there isn't
any unresolved stuff that I definitely need to put in chapter 5 for the story to feel complete. Celia's transformation is done,
the fruit concept has been fully introduced, the drifters and their backstory have been mentioned, all that kinda groundwork
has been laid.
What I'll definitely do from now on is plan and sketch the following chapters from start to finish before I start inking
and posting each page. For the first 2 chapters, maybe even some of the 3rd, it's been fine to go for whatever I felt
like, without being restricted in the story development by past choices, but I guess it would be better now to have
clear goals in front of me to work towards, probably better for my drawing rhythm and overall motivation/energy as well.
Anyway, one more page left. Hope you still like it
Art, Schwarzpelz © me
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Kind of a double page if it would appear in a comic/manga. But I wanted the big panel of Schwarzi running and it would
have been too small on a regular page.
Bit of a cliffhanger and then one final page for this chapter.
After that I'll like... tone down the whole thing a bit, go for a bit of a relaxed slice-of-life kinda feeling. At this point the
basics for the story have all been established, or... don't really know how to call it, most of the important story related
stuff has been touched so I might have the freedom to get back to some world/character building, after all there isn't
any unresolved stuff that I definitely need to put in chapter 5 for the story to feel complete. Celia's transformation is done,
the fruit concept has been fully introduced, the drifters and their backstory have been mentioned, all that kinda groundwork
has been laid.
What I'll definitely do from now on is plan and sketch the following chapters from start to finish before I start inking
and posting each page. For the first 2 chapters, maybe even some of the 3rd, it's been fine to go for whatever I felt
like, without being restricted in the story development by past choices, but I guess it would be better now to have
clear goals in front of me to work towards, probably better for my drawing rhythm and overall motivation/energy as well.
Anyway, one more page left. Hope you still like it
Art, Schwarzpelz © me
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i hopefully she didn't become the Hunter or captured by soldiers who knows that some humans who tern by from the fruit is illegal (which that is fake because the ever the king is possessed by a unknown spirit or under a spell from a wizard or either the warlock did it... or some unknown Prince who Want to take over half of the land because he owns a steampumk and modern civilization and city... Because of unknown reason... And her dad is somewhat on the 2nd island that they didn't know Exist and that ship is going there where she going where exile People or even Anthros who been tern by or from the fruit where they can not hurt or cause problems or something... So they live whatever they can feel like... But it a island with nine town with a castle in the middle but in the outer Realms theres villages and valleys... ect... Because it's very big maybe a gigantic island made for other outsiders who been either force or to be judged to stay on the island..) i don't know... One half... But you might figure it ... You have made so many locations maybe someday you could make a map?
Definetly a good call making it a "double page" as you call it, panel 1 is amazing! I guess the word what you were searching for is "Introduction", as you have introduced tonus all of the characters, functions of them in the story, and give us enough info to understand the plot. Hyped for chapter ending :3. Cheers!
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