Forgive me, I ran out of sharpie, so I used the computer ;]
Yeah.
Lola whited out after being beaten by the nameless-stag.
While she was "unconscious", Xejuss came to her in a vision.
Xejuss has a funny ability, much
like the details of Multiple personality disorder.
She can take over Lola's body and become someone completely different.
Very violent.
Very angry.
Very scary.
As you'll soon see.
((Meanwhile, Lola won't recall a thing unless Xejuss tells her))
Art + characters © me
Yeah.
Lola whited out after being beaten by the nameless-stag.
While she was "unconscious", Xejuss came to her in a vision.
Xejuss has a funny ability, much
like the details of Multiple personality disorder.
She can take over Lola's body and become someone completely different.
Very violent.
Very angry.
Very scary.
As you'll soon see.
((Meanwhile, Lola won't recall a thing unless Xejuss tells her))
Art + characters © me
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Comics
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 545 x 889px
File Size 570.9 kB
Figured I'd comment on this one as opposed to every single one.
First of all, nice writing. I like the story. The way it's drawn is very artistic as well. I love how you made their dialogue bubbles differently outlined.
It's also very well drawn and I especially love this page for that. The way you did the kitteh silhouette is amazing.
The only thing that peeved me a little was the "Lesbianism looks rather appealing right about now.." comment. That miffs me only a little because, I don't believe that homosexuality is caused by trauma from the opposite sex. However, that's my opinion. No need to agree with it,
This is beautifully done all in all, though. <3
First of all, nice writing. I like the story. The way it's drawn is very artistic as well. I love how you made their dialogue bubbles differently outlined.
It's also very well drawn and I especially love this page for that. The way you did the kitteh silhouette is amazing.
The only thing that peeved me a little was the "Lesbianism looks rather appealing right about now.." comment. That miffs me only a little because, I don't believe that homosexuality is caused by trauma from the opposite sex. However, that's my opinion. No need to agree with it,
This is beautifully done all in all, though. <3
I can understand your being miffed.
I was a little angry at myself for writing it like that.
But the only reason why I wrote it
was because of a personal friend of mine
who went through a similar experience
as I did, and that was her reasoning.
I thought it went well with the story line.
Thanks for all the wonderful feedback, darling,
and I appreciate your opinion.
♥
I was a little angry at myself for writing it like that.
But the only reason why I wrote it
was because of a personal friend of mine
who went through a similar experience
as I did, and that was her reasoning.
I thought it went well with the story line.
Thanks for all the wonderful feedback, darling,
and I appreciate your opinion.
♥
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